Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
To live in a particular place is his/her choice and the choice depends upon the various situation. I prefer to live in a big city for some reason which I am going to elaborate on in my essay.
Firstly, living in a big city is very easy for getting a good job. There are many big companies in the big city which are providing a job for many people. After my graduation, I am in a big company and getting satisfactory enumeration which is not easily obtained in a small town. I don’t have any tension even though I leave the current company as I can get new opportunities in other companies. Too many companies and too many opportunities, of course, entice the people from many areas of the country.
Secondly, we can get a chance to learn a lot of cultural and traditional values in big cities as large cities have in many populations from different casts, religions, traditions, and regions. For example, I never get the chance to learn about Newari, Maithili, Far western culture in, my birthplace, small city but now due to a large circle of friends from these communities in a big city. I got to know about different festivals. We celebrate each other’s’ festivals and share many things which we know, i.e. Newari food, dress, Maithili language and Festivals, Western language to greet each other. The opportunity to learn about different cultures and languages helped me very well when we were on the Nepal tour last year.
Moreover, a small city is also good to live a peaceful life but all the facilities of entertainment, education, e.tc, are not possible in a small town. The big city has a variety of large QNX for cinema, a big market for shopping and many universities for quality education. For example, in our country, 50% of all national university is situated in the capital city.
In my conclusion, living in a big city is getting more chances of a job and learning the cultural and traditional values of different places, cast, culture, source of entertainment, education, market, etc. If anyone wants to enjoy the real joy of life, a big city is a final destination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife, a big city is a final destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73641304348 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91170475403 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508152173913 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5842244263 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.529411765 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192011626783 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06955655269 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748216826095 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129275028722 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873913333699 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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