Children should not be forced by law to be educated by either public schools or home schooling if their parent do not wish to do so.
"Education is the birth right and everyone should have it", the slogan for child education in India. Every child should be provided with the basic education to sustain in such a technologically advanced world.
In this technological world, where computer and mobile has become the necessity of everyone, one without the basic knowledge cannot survive. In every part of the world, literacy is given the top priority over others to make their nation a developed nation. The author states that Children should not be forced to be educated if theri parents do not wish to do so. I completely disagrees with this statement but one should find out various reason behind the decision of the parents to not allow their child to get educated. There may be innumerous reasons with finance being the important one. Some parents don't have the basic amount of money required to get their child educated and lead a successful life. No parents would like to make the life of their children miser, instead they would want that their son or daughter make the best of what they can provide and lead a better lifestyle. Consider the example of Bihar state in India where literacy rate is the lowest in the nation. The per capita income of the people in Bihar is too low making it difficult for them to educate their child. Government should look into this matters and make people aware about the benefits of education.
It is said that "Investment done in educating a child is always a positive investment that is there is a guaranteed return of investment". the reason behind it being that knowledge comes handy in one or many forms in life. It alleviates the life of the people by bringing out their hidden qualities to the exterior world. Without being literate, Rajiv Gandhi, ex-Prime Minister of India, were not be able to bring computers in India and revolutionized the country being the IT hub at present.
In sum, Children should be forced by law to be educated by either public schools or home schooling even if their parents do not wish to do so. There should be schemes implemented by the government to create awareness among the nation about the importance of education and also to provide education at a minimal cost or at free to those who cannot afford it for a better society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'disagree'
Suggestion: disagree
...ents do not wish to do so. I completely disagrees with this statement but one should find...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e being the important one. Some parents dont have the basic amount of money required...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...heir child. Government should look into this matters and make people aware about the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... guaranteed return of investment'. the reason behind it being that knowledge c...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...i, ex-Prime Minister of India, were not be able to bring computers in India and re...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ia and revolutionized the country being the IT hub at present. In sum, Children sh...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237986270023 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.169336384439 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0778032036613 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0389016018307 0.0497285424764 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0411899313501 0.0444667217837 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12356979405 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0434782608696 0.0406280797675 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66702414768 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0366132723112 0.030933414821 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0045766590389 0.0016655270985 275% => OK
Determiners: 0.105263157895 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0297482837529 0.0249443105267 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0137299771167 0.0148568991511 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2300.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 396.0 452.878318584 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80808080808 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34595959596 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224747474747 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164141414141 0.200843997647 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0984848484848 0.132149295362 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66702414768 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505050505051 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 55.3119891204 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.380412469 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7475443764 59.4972553346 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.777777778 141.124799967 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.380412469 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 44.4747474747 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.62385321101 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289848188462 0.391690518653 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112268705188 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.060490302439 0.077325440228 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542979758 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125472114529 0.149214159877 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135685442141 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.214397149841 0.0892212321368 240% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.37822575485 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0981074605939 0.0692045440612 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237035926068 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.2069452082 0.0653680567796 317% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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