Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Different fields like business, politics, education, government etc. are driven by a individual or a group of individuals as per their plans and strategy during their tenure. Those individuals had devised their own sets of plans and strategies to lead a particular institution to sucess. The author claims that in any field the individual or a group of individuals leading the institution should step down after serving five years. And, in line of reasoning he delinates that the surest path to suceess for any enterprise is rejuvenating with a new leadership. I mostly diagree with this claim and reasoning. However, i do concede that in some cases the revitalization through new leadership can prove to be fruitful to particular enterprise.
First of all, a particular institution is working under the leadership of some group or individual person, and functioning as per the task done by executives. A particular institution has their own set of devised rules, regulations, plans and strategies. By following them in a serious manner, a institution reach upto their goals. For instance, Facebook, a leading social media platform, guided by Mark Zuckerberg is doing well till date. He has his own set of plans, strategies, and tactics, follwing them he has made the reputation of facebook as it has in present date. Working under a single leadership has been extremely sucessful in this case. Had the leadership been changed, would facebook still had same reputation?
Secondly, experience is a major factor that can lead a enterprise to the path of success. A experienced individual can drive a group of individual through various up and down remaining himself calm and aplomb during the entire process. For instance, a experienced businessman of Nepal, Binod Chaudhary, Managing Director of Chaudhary group of companies has been leading his company for long time. He has gained enough experience that can boost his ability to make correct decision in hard times which makes him successful every time he starts or take over any business. Insted of that, Had any inexperienced person faced similar difficulty, could that individual deal in a similar way?
Thirdly, time is not a static phenomenon, it changes and brings change in every thing. Time brings changes in every sector than human being can feel or perceive. Not more that a five years, world has skyrocketed in every sector. Profound changes can be observed in businesses, industry, technology, education, politics, government. People perceive in a completely different way than they used to five years ago. To cope with this changes and develop the enterprise in a way to lead to success, a new leadership that can revitalize a enterprise is must. For instance, few years ago, Nokia, a leading mobile phone company, which ruled global mobile phone marked went bankrupt. The sole reason behind that was the leadership which could not institute the necessary change in the enterprise. And, Nokia collapsed as it did not use android, a software preferred globally.
In conclusion, standing in line with the instances presented above, i mostly disagree with the claim and reasoning. Since, the probability of success offered by revitalization is outweighed by the probability of success that can be acheived by following experienced person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s rejuvenating with a new leadership. I mostly diagree with this claim and reasoning. However,...
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...with this claim and reasoning. However, i do concede that in some cases the revit...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a serious manner" with adverb for "serious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...plans and strategies. By following them in a serious manner, a institution reach upto their goals. ...
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... By following them in a serious manner, a institution reach upto their goals. For...
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...erience is a major factor that can lead a enterprise to the path of success. A ex...
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... difficulty, could that individual deal in a similar way? Thirdly, time is not a static phenome...
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...ey used to five years ago. To cope with this changes and develop the enterprise in a...
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...s, a new leadership that can revitalize a enterprise is must. For instance, few y...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... disagree with the claim and reasoning. Since, the probability of success offered by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2772.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97788502082 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505639097744 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 875.7 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3993141217 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23333333333 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213797868949 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517823723903 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609213388126 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112600225176 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735882760422 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.