It has been thought about for ages which information we can take as reliable and which we cannot. According to the ancient philosopher Rene Descartes we should question anything, even if one and one equals two. Today, a lot of facts that people thought of to be true turn out to be false in the end. Therefore, they suggest to distrust every piece of information. The following two reasons will show why this mindset may be harmful and lead to a stop in development.
First, mistrusting every new piece of information will lead to absurd situations and should only be considered if one has good reasons for doubt. The former minister for inner safety in Germany, Mr. Maassen, for example, was shown a video of some nazis harrassing refugees in Germany. But, he claimed this video to be fake, although there was no reason for him to do so. Furthermore, he never gave any reason why he assumed it to be fake and got fired form his position as minister for inner safety in the end. This demonstrates, that mistrust should always stand on solid grounds, which is why we cannot mistrust everything. Just because we do not know about everything.
Secondly, general distrust will lead to a negative attitude and gives rise to abstruse theories. People who distrust everything they hear often tend to fantasize their own theories on how the facts really align. Some people, for example, think of alternate facts, because they distrust the general accepted information about some subject. An example for this are 'clouds' which are emitted by airplanes; the general understanding is that these stripes are condensated water which has been exhausted by the airplane. A few individuals, on the contrary, believe that these emissions will lead to health problems and are manipulated by the government to change our minds. This example shows, that mistrusting every piece of information can lead to harmful attitudes towards some things and should therefore be avoided.
Some might argue that in most areas of science facts cannot be proven but only be disproven. Therefore, every new discovery should be viewed with criticism, which is a good advice. But, mistrusting every piece of information will ultimately lead to a denial of reality. This is the reason why it is a good thing to mistrust facts which intuitively seem wrong but mistrusting everything can be very harmful to one's own development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest distrusting'.
Suggestion: suggest distrusting
...to be false in the end. Therefore, they suggest to distrust every piece of information. The followi...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good advice'.
Suggestion: good advice
...ould be viewed with criticism, which is a good advice. But, mistrusting every piece of inform...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97506234414 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73190853307 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513715710723 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3472513701 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0952380952 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270361857787 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859422997513 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08685419691 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184934266212 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614363413866 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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