Claim The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models Reason Heroes and role models reveal a society s highest ideals

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Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.

It is true that many of us often make a perspective of a certain person and sometimes even made them our source of inspiration as well, but becoming a minion and just blindly following them is also hap hazardous for the society as a whole and hence one shouldn't directly consider them as their sole ideals or make provident outlook to the decisions they make and thus because of these protegees, one can judge the character of the society as well. Hence I disagree with the issue.

The best way to understand the disagreement in the claim can be seen in any country which is following a democratic form of government. The people in these countries are generally divided into three categories say right, left and centrist, the right ones are those who agree with all the decisions taken by their leader and support them, the left is those who generally oppose all their decisions, and centrists are neutral. So you can see that everyone has their heroes and leaders to whom they look up to and now in a country like India where so much population is there and so as the political parties as well, everyone has their leaders and heroes. So how can one judge the character of society as a whole, it is very difficult to make a generalized statement?

Furthermore, if we talk about the reason which is mentioned that is heroes and role models are at the apex in the list of ideals that people follow, but it could lead to the downfall of society as a whole. For example, if we take a country like Germany during the rule of autocratic Hitler, we knew that how much he and nazis hate jews but imagine a small kid who didn't even know who jews are would automatically start hating them just because the society around him idealize a man who is a dictator and doing everything to eradicate a particular society and hence these heroes shouldn't be put at the pinnacle of the ideals list.

Although, there could be some instances in which considering a certain individual as their hero or role model will help a certain individual to motivate them and the one will try to take the path that his role model took. For example, if I talk about myself I consider Elon Musk as my hero and role model, not just because he is the richest man in the world but because the journey he experienced and the decisions he had taken makes him the most contagious and captivating person for me. So if a third person would now judge me based on my hero they may have a pretty good image of me and hence in some cases, the character judgment of society could be accurate.

In conclusion, there is nothing such a best way to understand the character of society because everyone has their models and everyone has their perspective and mentality, one could not change it so easily and thus I disagree with the reason and claim both. At last, I want to say that one individual cannot persuade another one to the convinced that orange is the new black.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, third, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in some cases, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4492481203 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44162079323 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426691729323 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 532.0 23.0359550562 2309% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2367.0 118.986275619 1989% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 532.0 23.4991977007 2264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 122.0 5.21951772744 2337% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256096853541 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256096853541 0.0831039109588 308% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147487871636 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459741801982 0.0667264976115 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 265.5 14.1392134831 1878% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -460.04 48.8420337079 -942% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 209.6 12.1743820225 1722% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.01 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 32.31 8.38706741573 385% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.8971910112 454% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 214.8 11.2143820225 1915% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 266.0 11.7820224719 2258% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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