Claim The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models Reason Heroes and role models reveal a society s highest ideals Write a response in whic

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Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

society is a place where people of the same ideology and culture live. men and women living in it really goes a long way to reflect the real nature of the society in terns of attitude and ideology. Restricting the character of a society to the Heroes and role models that occupy the region is not enough to determine the real nature of the society compare to studying the society in general.

it is said that the prominent people in a region ar said to be those that have achieve hugely in a particular profession but that doesn't mean that their character or attitude will determine how the society is being functioned as a whole.Let's take a look at a prominent musician in nigeria, named; fela Anikulapo Kuti, widely known for scolding the government of the country on their terrible leadership,embezzlement, and other atrocities committed by the then government, through his song. Though,this aspect of fela life was good but if other aspects of his life was not a through nature of how the people of the country behaved back then. among those heinous things he did back then was marrying 28 wives on the same day, smoking on stage, dressing almost nakedly on stage, among other terrible things. if one is to use this to judge Nigerians living in the country during those days or even now, then one might be tending to a wrong path. this
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that being a famous person and the attitude of that man or woman doesn't define the through nature of the society.

Furthermore, when it comes to studying a society, we must give consideration to the society as a whole and not selected men and women as this will mislead us into jumping to irrelevant conclusion.For instance, it is assumed that 'ijebus', a tribe in nigeria are stingy due to their past record and frankly speaking, this can't be general as we still have some ijebus that are generous in giving even though isedsome are truly possess that attribute of stinginess . this
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, frankly, furthermore, if, look, really, so, still, then, for instance, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69930396965 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521994134897 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.220776033 60.3974514979 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.333333333 118.986275619 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8888888889 23.4991977007 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 5.21951772744 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161140694322 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710558758476 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111368965525 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105325657566 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137571132562 0.0667264976115 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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