The most effective strategy for a company to use to maintain and increase profits over the long term is to maintain high ethical standards
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
Though, maintaining high ethical standard in a company is not an easy task as it entails putting in a lot of cost and also keeping in touch with latest development but a company has no choice than to do that if increase in profit want to be maintained over a long period. I support the fact that, a company needs to maintain high ethical standards for continous and long term profits maximizattion due to the following reasons;
First and foremost, consider an agricultural industry sited in a particular location in which residence in that location are used to their well behaved and morally inclinedworkers and produce with a particular standard, while those produce are being purchased in high quantity from residence in that location and the company keeps making profit from the sale of the produce, for her to keep making profit on the long run, a new technique must be constantly devised in increasing the quality of the produce and ethical standadard of workers on customer relation, so that more of the people in that area will keep purchasing it even if the price is increased. moreso, the reidence can even take it higher by helping the company to advertise it to those in other part of the country indirectly. In that way, more customers will come for it.
Furthermore, maintaining higher ethical conduct is as well germane in such a way that, it reflects to the outside words the kinds of workers in that company. For instnace, consider a school in which teachers and managements in the school do not know out to relate to parent and guidiance, the school will suffer on the long run as parents will keep redrawing their wards from that kind of school.
In conclusion, a support the idea that, for a company to increase and maximize profits on the long run,high ethical standard must be maintained as it will make customers attracted to that kind of organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78769230769 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75834784613 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498461538462 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 234.442456279 60.3974514979 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.285714286 118.986275619 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.4285714286 23.4991977007 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.21951772744 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291878086039 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130181677756 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104015969242 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202394517168 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113872011333 0.0667264976115 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 14.1392134831 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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