the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government or industry or sports or in any field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation than competition.
As the saying goes; young lads are the leaders of tomorrow. To this regards, we must endevour to prepare them for the task ahead so that activities in the nation will keep going smoothly. I support the idea that, sense of cooperation than competition should be instilled in then so that when they get to the top, they will have the love and care for those under them and not be a dogmatic leader,
First and foremost, cooperation between leaders and followership is very germane as there is no one that knows it all. when there is unity in a nation,industry,sport,etc, it will be easy to achieve the desire goals that have been set as opinions will come from different angles and there not be segregation. For instance, in a football team, unity among the players brings success to the team compare to a team that are not united. A good example of this is the Greece national team that won the european championship in 2004. Surprisingly, they defeated the top ranks nation in europe on their way to lifting the cup. this shows the power of unity in a team.
Furthermore, in industry, unity among the staff enables the industry to keep moving forward and it makes production process easy. For example, consider an industry that is full of dogmatic and strict employers and does not allow give room for the opinion amd ideas of the employees in the running of the business, it will be difficult for that kind of company to move forward as those that are involve in production process will not be happy and the effect might bounced back on the company as a whole.
In conclusion, it is good that the sense of cooperation should be instilled on young people so that they will grow with that mindset for future and will be able to apply it in any sector they found themselves, be it in sport, government or industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58895705521 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73727591566 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.385173578 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 5.21951772744 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222816508265 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705417222768 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654609620893 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144074100084 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661899859435 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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