the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government or industry or sports or in any field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation than competition.
I think I am mostly agree to the statement that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government or industry or sports or in any field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation than competition.
The young people should be prepared to have the feeling or sense of cooperation in them which is required in leaders then only the leaders can put nation's benefit or industry's benefit before their own good. The young people if raised that way, once become leaders, will be cooperative to all other members say these are government officials, beaurocrats, top level executives or employees in case of industry or other team members in case of sports, the leaders will respect others' ideas, views, thoughts which might be completely different from their own.
For an instance, a president of the country if he/she is not cooperative, the other officials might not feel free to share their ideas or issues with president which is not good for the nation. Taking another example in case of companies, if the junior employees are not able to share their innovative ideas or the issues they are facing in company or the things which could be improved with their seniors like managers or vice presidents then it's not in the favor of the company, the employees might not feel motivated, energetic and innovative at work. The similar is the case with any other field.
On Contrary, If the leaders are coopertive, the colleagues or the members will feel free to share their problems, their ideas, solutions to improve things and to solve a problem a leader must know about the problem properly which can only be understood by being cooperative to other people of the organization even to the juniors. For an example, a manager of the company is always cooperative to his/her juniors and consider their interns have some ideas which is completely different than their work, so the manager can listen to interns' ideas and can utilize the idea to improve other things which even interns might not have thought of.
Henceforth, the leaders are required to be mostly cooperative than competitive, the only place where the sense of competition is required is while playing a game on the field in sports, for nation's economy development in case of government, etc. which is comparatively very less needed than cooperation whose need and advantage is much more than competition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
I think I am mostly agree to the statement that the best way for ...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prepared to have the feeling or sense of cooperation in them which is required in...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s like managers or vice presidents then its not in the favor of the company, the em...
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Line 7, column 487, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ome ideas which is completely different than their work, so the manager can listen t...
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Line 7, column 533, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'intern'.
Suggestion: intern
...heir work, so the manager can listen to interns ideas and can utilize the idea to impro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, then, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9068627451 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68385374681 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453431372549 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.425860423 60.3974514979 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.2 118.986275619 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.8 23.4991977007 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315502150694 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162483457353 0.0831039109588 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.228371311272 0.0758088955206 301% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261166419331 0.150359130593 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.290990377394 0.0667264976115 436% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 14.1392134831 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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