Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
There are many beggars on the street always begging to live their life or to get some food. I am mostly against giving any money to beggars unless it's really critical or the beggar is completely helpless.
Firstly, the begging has become a dirty profession. Even the normal people who can work for themselves are often observed begging on streets. Even child-trafficking case is also related. A large number of children are kidnapped every year and forced to beg and giving money is like ecourageing such things.
Secondly, the beggars start considering it as their right to get money from people. Instead of being polite and grateful, they talk in authoritative and bossy manner. Sometimes, The beggars even curse people, when people don't give any money.
Finally, even the most handicapped and disabled people are able to work and live an independent life. So, giving money to normal and healthy beggars encourage them to live life like beggars. They never try to come out of situtation which is neither good for them nor for the country's future.
In conclusion, I would say we should not give money to beggars, rather giving food to hungry is better choice. Lesser, we give any money to beggars, more they will try to become independent and live a self-dependent life. Furthermore, the child-trafficking cases for begging would be reduced.
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...for them nor for the countrys future. In conclusion, I would say we should not...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 225.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05777777778 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77165191194 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604444444444 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1548786073 48.9658058833 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8666666667 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210994051443 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716407198576 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502825135988 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12443431278 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315175607314 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.