Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
While some people believe giving money to beggars on the street is wrong, there are others who think that its the right thing to do. Personally, I believe that its wrong to give money to beggars. I feel this way for three reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First reason, the very nature of a beggar is to have lost all hope in life and who is unable sustain themselves in this world. Keeping this as a premise, it doesn't make sense to provide money to them as they wouldn't be able to spend it wisely. For instance there have been many cases of beggars dying due to drug overdose this mainly attributes to the money obtained from begging which they later used to procure illegal drugs.
Second reason, it is established that beggars don't know how or where to spend the money it would be prudent of us to provide them with basic amenities like food, water, and shelter. This would help them temporarily to get back on their feet. For instance, we should join a non-profit solely focusing on providing food, water or shelter. This would further help society progress and also allow us to be more compassionate to the less fortunate.
Finally, there have been cases where people use begging as front for organised crime. By providing money to beggars, we may inadvertently be funding such crime syndicates. For example, there have been cases reported of police arresting beggars having large amounts of black money. This comes to show that our money should be given through secure and trusted sources.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is wrong to give beggars money. This is because they are not wise enough to know what to do with it, other means of helping should be considered and begging is often used as a front for organised crime.Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62322946176 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30725718265 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524079320113 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2243957988 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445223683939 0.236089414692 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148981090255 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181662723408 0.0737576698707 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277876739136 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.247171869899 0.0645574589148 383% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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