Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
In this world though all men are created equal by God, not every one has the same amount of money. While some people have enough money to bear the expenses of of living of them as well as their successors, their are many people in the society who has no money to eke out a day. So, it is a common practice to help the poor. But helping poor does not mean that we have to create a tradition of begging as it is harmful both for society and the economy.
If poor people have that opportunity to earn money so easily by begging in the streets, it will encourage many others and ultimately will make many people lazy. It demands effort and hardship to earn a single penny and we should appreciate those who struggles and works hard to earn their livings. But begging in the street does not involve any struggle of both physical and mental. So, we should not encourage begging by simply giving our money to those beggar.
Moreover, economy of a country is disturbed when majority of its people involve in some easy ways of making money. The economical growth of a country gets healthy when its people work hard and contributes to the economy of the country. For example, people who work hard day and night in garments factories, earn money by exporting clothes to other countries and thus they make the economy of their country stronger. On the other hand, simply begging does not involve any productive effort, and so does not help a country to become improved in terms of economical advancement.
Finally, we have many other ways to help the poor by which we can assist them to improve their livings. For instance, the money which we want to give a poor person begging in the street, can be invested in a factory in which a number of people can work to make their livings. By doing this we can contribute to the economical advancement of our country, and at the same time, can help those poor persons to improve their luck.
Helping other is a great virtue, and we should help the poor as they needs assistance of ours. But we should not help them in a way which is not going to change their luck. Instead we should assist them in such a way that they can make their own livings and would not require further help from us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43414634146 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27005439061 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426829268293 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7445932683 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160373365846 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583955277437 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519137524224 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096055864566 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385655178027 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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