Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
An inference was listed by the speaker to illustrate that the characters of all-genders serving as heroes or role models are enough to be studied when people try to figure out a character of a whole society. The rationale of such deduction is limited, much less its conclusion. Because only heroes or role models are scant to describe a veracious society, as them may be acted as an exemplar that a society wants to attain but does not. And there are a number of other aspects helping scholars understand a society are overlooked.
Sometimes heroes and role models represent a veteran quality of a culture in which local residents tribute it frequently. The presence of them, however, could be thousands years away from the present, especially in countries possessing rich history. Yue Fei, a loyal general who was murdered by emperor served by him in Chinese history, is remembered by Chinese people now and see him as a model scarifying to his emperor. He is totally a suitable choice for scholars to study to understand Chinses society on the part of the alleged logic. But in fact, do scholars grasp much current ideals in China? And they might could do that if they could have gone back in Yue Fei's time, but the answer is still not, in that Yue Fei was slurred as a betrayer at his time until seventy years after his death. Hence, the best way to understand the features of a society is not to simply study on someone seeing as heroes, but to take more relative factors into account.
Except for heroes, many other aspects of a society might be chosen as an entrance to dive in a society. Fist of all, the history, ranging from economy, which is the most important factor in Marx's viewpoint, culture, politics and technology. To illustrate, studying on Chinese history of economy brings scholars a door to access the essential rationale of China's tragedy in last century, agricultural economy holds weaker economic backbone than did revolution of industry. And through understanding of politics, scholars will be clear about how did China become one of the five major countries in UN from that a poverty nation built in 1949. therefore, there are multiple better aspects of a society existing to give people investigating that society, mitigating the so-called importance of role models and heroes.
While challenges mentioned before mitigate heroes and models significance comparing with other meaningful realms, in some extent, heroes also have its special value to diffuse the social ideology. In a nutshell, a limited range to conclude what a society is is provincial for the complexity of a society, multi-dimensional study is necessary to prevent relating studies from a narrowing horizon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
...ran quality of a culture in which local residents tribute it frequently. The presence of ...
Line 3, column 893, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sees'.
...ciety is not to simply study on someone seeing as heroes, but to take more relative fa...
Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...om that a poverty nation built in 1949. therefore, there are multiple better aspects of a...
Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
...imited range to conclude what a society is is provincial for the complexity of a soci...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, while, except for, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97577092511 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77005039316 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570484581498 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3080592409 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276168618497 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803364150575 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667123183518 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172786541273 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801908469319 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.