Claim: The emergence of the online "blogosphere" has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States.
Reason: When anyone can publish political opinions easily, standards for covering news and political topics will inevitably decline.
Write a response in which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The speaker here asserts that the quality of the political discourse in the United states has been significantly weakened by the burgeoning of social media or online portal as anyone can publish any information or their opinions freely leading to the discord in the political environment. Although the claim made may be true to some extent but from my point of view, I somehow disagree with the assertion made. As there is a famous saying that "knowledge is Power", so i believe that the more knowledge and opinions from the public i.e through the online media or elsewhere it ultimately will leads to more understanding, awareness and opinions from the diverse group of public which may further enhance the political environment. However, i do concede that if the online portals are used for publishing fake and irrelevant news then, it may lead to the distortion in the quality of political discourse.
As America is one of the democratic country, where the government should work for the public and should address their will. Thus, a blog that enables the people to share their opinion regarding any issue more easily and conviniently. The public wills and opinions could be easily known through this efficient online system. Therefore, this further enhance the political activity as they can work more efficiently viewing public opinions and their will.
Similarly, diverse online system publishing the political issues, opinions has enabled the diverse group of people accessing the information more easily and conveniently. Today, beacause of the easy accessibility of the internet, the people in the every corner are much more of the current political issue and can place their opinions more regarding the issue which may further enhance the political discourse.
Despite the much effectiveness of the online "blogosphere" in US political enviroment, it may lead to political disturbance if this free access: online system is utilized in negative way. If much irrelevant and fake news being published without any censoring than it may lead to dispersion of fake issue to the public which may lead to huge discord among the public and the government.\
In a nutshell, The quality of political discourse in the United states will be improved through this much useful and effective online portals as public can be well aware about the political issue and also can place their views and opinions which my be inevitable in improving the political programmes. Thus, emergence of the online "blogosphere" is the welcome change in the U.S. if used in the much effective and reliable way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ker here asserts that the quality of the political discourse in the United states...
^^
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...political discourse in the United states has been significantly weakened by the b...
^^
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...akened by the burgeoning of social media or online portal as anyone can publish a...
^^
Line 1, column 483, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...that 'knowledge is Power', so i believe that the more knowledge and opi...
^
Line 1, column 607, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...e media or elsewhere it ultimately will leads to more understanding, awareness and op...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 754, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nce the political environment. However, i do concede that if the online portals a...
^
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ublishing the political issues, opinions has enabled the diverse group of people ...
^^^
Line 8, column 247, Rule ID: MY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'may be' or 'might be'?
Suggestion: may be; might be
...an place their views and opinions which my be inevitable in improving the political p...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24465558195 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03151357102 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432304038005 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.216777501 60.3974514979 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.846153846 118.986275619 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3846153846 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357449642643 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141370364657 0.0831039109588 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893528826626 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214469640008 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693608341189 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.1392134831 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.