Concern about preserving cultural tradition may indicate progressive nation. But, every nation is individuals, have their own focus which varies from one to another. It is going too far to say that all government wants to support only their major cities by financially in order to preserve cultural traditions.
First of all cultural traditions mainly form in county-side area. Rural people heart and soul try to preserve their custom and belief. Most of the village people in the world lead life following the tradition. Oppositely, town people always try to update their lifestyle with the help of technology. Their mind is competitive to progress in international competition. They have no headache with pastoral tradition or not willing to obey these rules. These customs seem to them vague and absurd most of the time. For instance, town children grow up with mobile phone, video game, hangout with friends. On the other hand, village children grow up with extended family where rituals are maintained by generation to generation.
Secondly, urban areas have already existed many urban facilities which is absent in rural areas like education opportunity, municipal facilities, job opportunity, business facilities etc. Most of the time rural areas people are deprived from all types of facilities. Under-developed and sometimes developing countries scenario like that many children are not going to school lack of financial ability of their parents. Alternatively, village schools are situated at a long distance as well the condition of village road are so poor. As a result, children do not want to go there. In context of developing country like Bangladesh, this is a common phenomenon in rural area. Lack of food, proper nutrition, medical treatment and others basic need, rural people always struggle their survival power. Ignoring this kind of important issues which is directly linked up with national development, focus on preservation of cultural heritage seems ridiculous.
Lastly, if it is okay for all above-discussed issue then this country may be well-developed. It is more logical to them focusing on their historical preservation, their traditions and so on. Historical monument and place contain artistic significance as well cultural behavior (language, food habit, communication nature, hospitability etc.) marks one country as popular to visitor. Like Indian subcontinent popularized with their varieties of spicy food and religious belief. Every year, many tourists all over the world visit here and articulates the economy with foreign currency this tourists sector.
At last, need-based assessment should be helpful for a government to take decision their priority for actions. Different countries have different need and priority which is not same for all. Ensuring first the basic need of public and then government could focus others issue. Money should be invested that type of sector that's why most of people take advantages from them. Government should take care of all issues of his/her country, not only focus any particular subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 587, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
... the economy with foreign currency this tourists sector. At last, need-based assessm...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...foreign currency this tourists sector. At last, need-based assessment should be...
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Line 9, column 323, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... should be invested that type of sector thats why most of people take advantages from...
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Line 9, column 333, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... invested that type of sector thats why most of people take advantages from them. Government s...
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Line 9, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not only focus any particular subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, kind of, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2606.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46331236897 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88297539003 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 822.6 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.091020062 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.064516129 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3870967742 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1935483871 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180710834482 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452385099493 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648287429545 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118154558031 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101100708119 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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