Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The governments are responsible to ensure the adequate financial support to big cities and other municipalities in order to preserve the tradition of their countries. The big cities in each country have a crucial role in the preservation of the tradition and the cultivation of the new culture. Though it is my personal belief that the small cities and villages are the real depiction of the culture in one country and these areas should receive the majority of the financial support.
Indeed, the major cities are the cultural center of a nation as they accommodate a plenty of archaeological sites, museums and they host an enormous variety of cultural events. these overcrowded cities play an important role in the preservation of the tradition of the nation but also they generate the new culture of a country. For instance, the capital of greece, Athens, is a big city with a brilliant history among the centuries and is also the major generator of the new culture in greece.
On the other hand, it is truth that, in rural areas of a country, people are honor their traditions and are more resistant in the modern lifestyle. these people are function as live museums as they transfer the morals by generation to generation and are valuable in the preservation of the tradition of a country. For example, the aborigins in australia, are the first residents of australia before the colonization of England. Thus, aborigins are the live history of australia and the Australian government should care for the thriving of this tribe.
Moreover, people in rural areas are more authentic and have not been affected from the dominant trend of urbanization and the endorsement of a certain lifestyle. these people love their tradition and organize various folklore cultural events to celebrate traditionally. For instance, when someone visits Switzerland, realizes the culture of this country only when he/she visits the mountainous villages in the Swiss Alps with the characterized architecture and the numerous farms with cows.
To conclude, rural areas and small cities which succeed to remain untouchable of the modern lifestyle are the clear depiction of the tradition of a country and the governments should care for the adequate financial support of these residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16756756757 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91514270249 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443243243243 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0556668943 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.571428571 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375541243478 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131785118852 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101327568279 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200316914496 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119062008938 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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