Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Any form of media plays a critical role in shaping the socio-political landscape of the region. Newspapers, telemarketing, posters,
advertisements or hoardings all contribute towards showcasing the best of the personality or an organization to the public. In this 21st
century, media publicity has become paramount in the exposure hungry world. It is impossible to avoid scrutiny, both positive and negative,
that comes with the publicity we seek. Prolonged dissection of any choices a public personality makes humanizes it and consequently starts
highlighting it's errors. But even in such a attention frenzied world, an ideal model of a person can be created if media handles available
on our hands are used as means to an end instead of considering it as an end itself.
Political leaders and influencing personalities have used mass media and public propaganda as a tool since start of its invention.
considering the example of first Prime minister of India, Jawaharlal Nehru, shows us the extent to which the media propaganda can be used to
convey a public image of a person, making him almost a larger than life personality. Although it is true that the Life and Choices of Mr. Nehru
came under intense criticism when he ascended to the position of PM, the fact that that the image he had casted unified the entire Indian
community in the time of need cannot be refuted.
Even the media personality like the Kim Kardashian has intense conflicts and flaws in her real life. But instead of getting caught in the
backlash of her exposed flaws, she created an empire of the scrutiny she gained. Not only did she overcome the negative scrutiny, she made
sure to show the world the power of mind with a purpose. And along the way of proving herself, she became an widely recognized influencer
who is followed by millions today.
Media scrutiny can be used for rapid rise in social influence by understanding the real time community trends. If a celebrity is giving
people what they want, then the negative scrutiny can also be turned in an advantage. The reputation can be easily built and maintained
in such scenarios. The life and story of Elon Musk gives this point its rest. The failure of his tests can fiscally cost up to billions,
but the media image he casts makes him a hero of our times. this leads people to believe that his next endeavor will be a striking success.
so in the conclusion, the image we maintain on the social platforms builds our reputation. In todays world, an influential living man or woman can
can become a hero for the masses by maintaining his public image and riding the wave of negative and positive scrutiny with dignity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ion. Newspapers, telemarketing, posters, advertisements or hoardings all contribu...
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...id scrutiny, both positive and negative, that comes with the publicity we seek. P...
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...scended to the position of PM, the fact that that the image he had casted unified the ent...
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...overcome the negative scrutiny, she made sure to show the world the power of mind...
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...mmunity trends. If a celebrity is giving people what they want, then the negative...
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...ation can be easily built and maintained in such scenarios. The life and story of...
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...of Elon Musk gives this point its rest. The failure of his tests can fiscally cost ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, then, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93846153846 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78587705704 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4720425412 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119986488199 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353950547026 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317409225147 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366074992321 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336564726611 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.