Childhood is the best part of our life

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Childhood is the best part of our life

We remember the memories of our childhood in the melancholy moments of our life. These snippets of our past, in turn, bring a smile on our lips and solace to our battered soul. But as a case with all our lives, some sweet memories are laced with a bitter tang, while some are just bliss and happiness. The childhood in every persons story is the golden time in his life. His present, a mere consequence of that wonderful past.

The glorious and adventurous childhood depicted by Indian author R K Narayan in his book, 'Malgudi days' is the epitome of every indian childs version of holidays. The summertime memories of a sunny afternoon in the coastal gardens, erractic adventures with a group of scrawny and fast friends, and the warm nights under the starry sky are the ideal way any Indian chilld would want to spend his summer days. This book and the memories etched in it lay ode to fact that the memories made in the childhood are irrreplacable parts of our personality. 'Untethered happiness', is the term many would use to describe their childhood.

But on the other hand, the memories of that long gone part of our life also potray some incubus moments. The fears and phobia's we harbour as adults are majorly formed in our childhood. Slight incidences in our past can have far fetched ramifications on our decisions as a man or a woman. These are the parts we would rather forget, but never can. They would be etched in our memories till the very end, collated beside the good ones. Not only our fears, but the taste of hunger, the lugubrious memories of poverty, a stint of drug abuse and many more dark episodes lurk in the recesses of our mind till the very end of our time.

The childhood is generally a pepper salt mixture of incidences. But when we visit back on it as adults, it becomes a showcase of our fondest memories. Through good and bad, if the child has had a closely knit group of friends, the happy memories become hilarious and the sad ones become the memoir of how to grow up.

In conclusion, childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. Lace it with some good friends and it becomes an unforgettable chapter in a man's life

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Average: 8.8 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...s and happiness. The childhood in every persons story is the golden time in his life. H...
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Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he golden time in his life. His present, a mere consequence of that wonderful pas...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
... indian childs version of holidays. The summertime memories of a sunny afternoon in the co...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...on, childhood is the happiest time of a persons life. Lace it with some good friends an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55128205128 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48041506781 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541025641026 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0871673658 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378926342407 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124255898081 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939637312688 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20720019963 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936942941096 0.0645574589148 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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