Claim Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system Reason Laws cannot change what is in people s hearts or minds Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.

Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

Modern society is often considered as a newly formed society full of iconoclastic people with radical mindset where law and order are not enough to change people's hearts and thoughts.However, some scholars argue that law and legal system are always capable of binding people's action but the evidence of several instances in society around gives different view, where people are unrestrained with the formal system of law. The prompt posit that modern people's heart and their thought process is indifferent to the formal juridiction and law. Do people from early history of America, though racism was legal practice at that time, were they restrained by the racism and were enslaved always? Thirty-three percent of reservation seat of women was claimed in the politics of few south Asian country like Nepal, India, but is there female representative choosen by people? Every act and policy has ever been properly implemented as they are expected to be in any country?I'm completely consonant with the position stated by the prompt where the position can be well evaluated with the answer to the given three question.

To begin this, was the enslaved black people always marginalized and dominated from the right, although the legal policy has deliniated them as a minority for several years? Of course not, the black people were so determined and were driven by the idea of freedom, that they finally got their basic right. Likewise, the government which had its legal system so rigid was bound to relinquish its idea of legal ensalvement. This illustration clearly illuminate that the emancipation of slaves was in the heart of black people which resulted the legal policy of America to be ammended.

Furthermore, equity and equality, although advocated highly by this recent world government, has it properly been adopted by the people at the community level? Definitely not. This practice of bias behaviour has been deeply rooted in the society, people attitude and culture that the law enforced are incapable to change the mind of people. This very culture of gender bias in every level of society from household to government politics, is quite firmly seated that will only be changed if the attitude of people is targeted rather than enforcing law. This explanation mirroring the society concede that legal law and rules are not only capable to solve the problem of society.

Moreover, there are several policies drafted, written and signed by the government, but the objective of certain policy and law has mostly been unable to meet the proper implementation. And the major reason for this is the lack of inclusive law which has been based on the consensus and common belief of people and their present need.

Of course some people believes that law, constitution of country is supreme, however, we cannot forget that the more we try to hold the sand tightly in fist of our hand, more quickly its escape from the hand. So, the law and order are prepared considering the sentiments of public and should always be inclusive and representative.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08349900596 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6478754992 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508946322068 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 814.5 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7995207704 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.411764706 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5882352941 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282473926178 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816303586129 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574019866738 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139212128821 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419292655308 0.0667264976115 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments