No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the posit

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No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

It is believed that, holistic approach of interdisciplinary field only makes a particular field complete. There are several field of science, applied science, pure science which are either isolated in their own field, while some are interconnected with each other and some are derivative of another field.The statement above posit that, lack of outside field knowledge and experience makes certain field incapable to progress significantly. I am completely consonant with the idea of need of interdisciplinary knowledge, inorder to make certain field more better comparatively, for given three reasons.

To begin with, a field might seems complete from the outside but even the most isolated subject require some nuances of knowledge from other discipline. For an instance, Medical field seems complete on its own, where doctors and patient seems to be two wheels of a profession. But, the reality is more convoluted than what it seems. The medical field needs the help of pharmcologist, a biotechnologist and a lab technician who are not solely under the pure medical field. Thus, inorder to run a proper medical facilities in any hospital or medical institute, different fields technicians are required and play a vital role for successful run of a field.

Secondly, the development of any field without assistance of another field becomes ploddingly slow. Although, it cannot be denied that any field can run itself, but proper development as mentioned in statement, a significant advance, definitely needs mix of knowledge and experience. For an instance, the historian about the history of world were not so clear and were developing the fact about history in a snail's pace, but with the development of anthropologist and anthropology field,the historian have been able to derive many fact about our world history.Further, it is true that historian alone could have derived the fact and chronology of past event, but with the integration of anthropologist, the work progressed exponentially. Thus, it always good to inetgrate specialist and different intellectual minds to have better outcomes.

Moreover, there are several field which has been developing at a very slow pace as it could not be interconnected with other field, making it develop slower than ever. The fact that agriculture production of most of the countries has been developed in a very slow pace, is the result of lack of integration with other discipline. However, the developed countries like US, United kingdom are able to integrate engineering as a agriculture engineering in the field, making its production a leading among the world. The late trend of integration of precision farming, geospatial knowldge, remote sensing and internet of thing (IOT) in agriculture has helped, flourish and advance more than ever.

Of course, some eclectic mind argue that for a development of field, a comprehensive knoweldge within a field is enough. However, these mindset has been proved to be parochial and a major contributer to impede the development process within a field. Thus, the knowledge and experience from diverse background proves to be progressive.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: several fields
... a particular field complete. There are several field of science, applied science, pure scien...
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...cular field complete. There are several field of science, applied science, pure scien...
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...nd some are derivative of another field.The statement above posit that, lack of out...
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Line 1, column 553, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...nowledge, inorder to make certain field more better comparatively, for given three reasons....
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...paratively, for given three reasons. To begin with, a field might seems compl...
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.... Thus, inorder to run a proper medical facilities in any hospital or medical institute, d...
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...role for successful run of a field. Secondly, the development of any field w...
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...ough, it cannot be denied that any field can run itself, but proper development a...
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...of anthropologist and anthropology field,the historian have been able to derive many...
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...,the historian have been able to derive many fact about our world history.Further, it is ...
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...erive many fact about our world history.Further, it is true that historian alone could ...
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...lectual minds to have better outcomes. Moreover, there are several field wh...
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...omes. Moreover, there are several field which has been developing at a very slo...
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...om are able to integrate engineering as a agriculture engineering in the field, m...
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... IOT in agriculture has helped, flourish and advance more than ever. Of ...
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...ourish and advance more than ever. Of course, some eclectic mind argue that...
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Message: Did you mean 'this mindset' or 'these mindsets'?
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...ldge within a field is enough. However, these mindset has been proved to be parochial and a m...
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...e background proves to be progressive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, of course, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2649.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37322515213 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14945678586 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498985801217 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 843.3 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 15.0 4.99550561798 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.6200455054 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.421052632 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9473684211 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247666463587 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833345383658 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585447778405 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146755421459 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508702373784 0.0667264976115 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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