Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Today topic argue that the law and legal system cannot solve many matters of modern society. I partially agree with issues are impossible to deal with legislation matter, however, in the portion of my community has the possible solution for it as well. The following essay will show why such argument cannot be generalized that the problems of modern society could not resolved by laws and the legal system and advantages and disadvantages on both side.
Admittedly, legal based solution might not give the detailed settlement for prevalent problems in the whole communities. according to the author, the relentless mind of general people are one reason of it. In addition, to deal with all the incidents of our society are involvely and perplexingly convoluted so devising one exact solution probably not exists. For example, speaking of economical issue, if we pass a bill on regulation of an accident to solve it, the prediction of it spread out and deteriorate another problems in diverse areas. Nonetheless, it is hard to admit all the issue cannot be mended by the legal system according to the following reasons.
First, endless emissions of carbon dioxide are going to be importantly argued to a problem of global warming and legal solution performed significant achievement to relax the effects of carbon dioxide on increment of temperature in the whole earth by making a law related to regulation and restriction of factories. In more details, the government impose more burden taxes on the companies depending on the amount of producing carbon dioxide. After that, the companies has been tried to make a possible alternation of sources of engine instead of using carbon dioxide.
Second, interesting group will be the main issue discussing the possible agreement of different group. To take the problem and find common ground, united states adopted the organization of republican and run the national assembly to find the middle ground. even though the most people have the different minds and desires in society, we figured out the possible ways to maximize the total benefits of member in our society.
Secondly, starvation of poor people are main issue in modern society. To call to remembrance the solution of it, we've established the foundation for them at least to keep up the least quality of their life by the law. For example, the government in some states managing the complimentary restaurant for homeless people and they also provide professional education programs to help the people who are seeking the jobs. by setting the minimal systems to support the second-class citizens, the social problems of increment of those people are not rapidly increasing today, even though it decrease.
In conclusion, even though it seems enough to say the law and legislation system effects nothing to solve many problems of modern society, we've already seen several examples which benefits to devised a solution of modern society. Therefore, it is hard to generalize which side on this issue are dominant and it would be better to consider all the sides.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'resolve'
Suggestion: resolve
...he problems of modern society could not resolved by laws and the legal system and advant...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...lent problems in the whole communities. according to the author, the relentless mind of g...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...nal assembly to find the middle ground. even though the most people have the differe...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
...call to remembrance the solution of it, weve established the foundation for them at ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...lp the people who are seeking the jobs. by setting the minimal systems to support ...
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Line 17, column 586, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...apidly increasing today, even though it decrease. In conclusion, even though it se...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asing today, even though it decrease. In conclusion, even though it seems enou...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
... solve many problems of modern society, weve already seen several examples which ben...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2593.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 501.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17564870259 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78467508357 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518962075848 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 828.0 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1901032795 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.65 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.05 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241289176769 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694668888692 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662420833447 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12400506193 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808733288996 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.