Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Modern problem required modern solution. I agree with the statement that many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system. Tough there are many laws made still some of the problems don’t have solution and others cannot be solved by legal system.
To begin with, laws are made to solve many problems and one who does not follow laws suffers from great penalty. Some may think that if they follow path of legal system than it will take lot of time so laws are useless other may think that every problem have solution and one should follow legal system. For instance, in past bond was sign between China and India that no country will use weapons against each other. But China without breaking the law kills 20 Indian soldiers with rods. This proves that one cannot change what is there in people’s heart and mind. So this action of china requires modern solution.
Secondly, there are many problems which don’t have laws or it require lot of time if they are tried to solve by legal system. For example, terrorist attack on 26/11 in India. Group of terrorist attack on Taj Hotel in Mumbai and after they were taken down one of them was arrested. Many civilian died in this attack but as Indian government decide to go through legal system and laws that terrorist was kept alive in prison for several years where he don’t deserve to live for such a long period and after 5-6 years he given death penalty. It took many years to bring justice to those people who died in that attack. This shows that sometime going through legal system takes lot of time and there are no laws made for every problem.
Finally, laws cannot change people’s heart or mindset. As every criminal think that he/she is not doing anything wrong by stealing food for leaving but according to law it is wrong. This proves that people’s heart and mindset cannot be changed. Those criminal don’t understand that food that they are steeling belong to someone else who has done hard work to achieve it. They only think about themselves and they have created the mindset that their action is not wrong.
In conclusion, there are many new problems taking birth everyday and those problem required modern solution and they cannot be solved my laws and legal system because we cannot change people’s heart and mindset.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...m. Tough there are many laws made still some of the problems don’t have solution and others...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...ws suffers from great penalty. Some may think that if they follow path of legal syste...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...ny problems which don’t have laws or it require lot of time if they are tried to solve ...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun civilian seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many civilians'.
Suggestion: Many civilians
...re taken down one of them was arrested. Many civilian died in this attack but as Indian gover...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[2]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doesn’t'.
Suggestion: doesn’t
...ve in prison for several years where he don’t deserve to live for such a long period ...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...here are many new problems taking birth everyday and those problem required modern solut...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
... new problems taking birth everyday and those problem required modern solution and they canno...
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Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nnot change people’s heart and mindset.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74938574939 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0422021497 2.79657885939 73% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469287469287 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2100140526 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0476190476 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335167210485 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124753567809 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120196456347 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233532474476 0.150359130593 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998969389954 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.