Claim Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system Reason Laws cannot change what is in people s hearts or minds Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an illegal way" with adverb for "illegal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... business organization through power or in an illegal way. People may get deceived in choosing pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 37.0 14.8657303371 249% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 104.0 58.6224719101 177% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3274.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 641.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10764430577 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0316973083 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73826550748 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424336973479 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1025.1 704.065955056 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5671682177 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.612903226 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6774193548 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35483870968 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 19.0 5.13820224719 370% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253964240162 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073634003551 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711393931839 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163450406069 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827483300563 0.0667264976115 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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