Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Each country has its own laws and legal system. To bring peace and prosperity in the society, laws are implemented. Generally, laws and legal system ensue peace and harmony inside society or maintain moral behavior in people activities. Well, it is not true that many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system, however there are some immoral persons in the society who are constantly engaged in doing immoral activities and makes law system arduous to change their hearts or minds.
Firstly, laws and legal system are the tools of constitution to ensure peace and prosperity in the society. Without laws, people are free to engage in illegal activities like mass killings, kidnapping and embezzlement of funds. For instance- without laws and legal system, people usually use illegal equipment like gun in case of insignificant matter like tussle with neighborhood. There may be a news of bloodshed in street for an insignificant or minor collapse of two vehicles. We may hear a news of mass decimation in college due to gang fight in between two groups for a minor case without laws or legal system. Thus, legal system is particularly implemented to ensure moral behavior in people activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...tussle with neighborhood. There may be a news of bloodshed in street for an insignifi...
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Line 2, column 494, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...r collapse of two vehicles. We may hear a news of mass decimation in college due to ga...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 33.0505617978 15% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04926108374 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72176292125 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0257570896 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258745621127 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104434967621 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723295019202 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218380959533 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849265219402 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.