Claim In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in
private business matters.
The given prompt is elicitating that the government should play their roles in private and small businesses to help them and to burgeon their growth. I completely agree with the issue prompt because of the following reasons.
Every human being in society is not rich and cannot afford the cost of living. The society comprises poor, middle-class, and rich people. It is observed mostly that the middle-class people in the society somehow manage to survive in the environment. However, it is difficult for poor people to get themselves prone to the ever-growing market. The prices of the basic products are increasing day by day. Thus, if anyone who is below in status level, is starting any small business then it is the duty of the government to corroborate their ideas and potential. As the government takes taxes from the society, a part of it must be invested in small businesses and ideas, so that it would help them at their initial stage and the businesses ensure not to face the issue of initial investment cost. For example, the government of India has introduced a law for the farmers of India, known as the "Farmer's Act", which helps the farmers of India financially. If a farmer is starting a farming business, then the farmer is provided with all the equipment's and machines free of cost. All the prices of equipment such as harvester, tractor, seeds, irrigation tools, etc, are covered by the government.
Not only to the poor and the needy but also for the middle-class people, it is important to provide a small amount contributed by the government body. As the middle-class society can afford the cost of education and thus, many people are educated and literate, if any student of any particular university came up with an exciting idea, it would be helpful to bolster the university by providing equipment costs. For instance, many US universities provide their students with grants for their research. If any student is working on a research project, the government ensures raising the funds necessary for accomplishing that research and not the university. However, this needs to be made mandatory to incorporate the growth and betterment of society.
Nevertheless, the government should first make sure that they are investing in the right place. If any idea or business is not consisting enough potential then the investment made by the government will go to waste. Hence, it is crucial to ruminate the idea completely that if it is worthy enough to gain the facilities from the government.
To sum, small businesses can grow only if the help is acknowledged by the government party. It helps the people to just worry about the idea that they are working upon and not other factors that might deteriorate their potentials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...he right place. If any idea or business is not consisting enough potential then the investment ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99134199134 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84640511453 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480519480519 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7839962336 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.818181818 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216590950254 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619993568901 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964388534485 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15000264018 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799441872312 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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