Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in
private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.
In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons
and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
Business autonomy instills a sense of freedom and trust in the government. Many big businesses shift their operations offshore, in countries where government intervention is more lenient. Small businesses don’t have the luxury of doing that, they have to adhere to the government polices strictly. Many of the small businesses have to go through a massive bureaucratic hassle to start the business itself, most of them rarely make profit in the first few years due to huge debts, bureaucratic costs and legal costs. I believe that government intervention in small private businesses should be minimal. This will not only encourage more entrepreneurs but also help the businesses enhance their trust in the government
Many big businesses today had humble beginnings in the past, when government intervention was minimal. Companies like Amazon, Google, Uber were all once small startups but today, they are some of the biggest corporations on the planet. Back in the 1990s, when these companies were still in their infancy, government backed them heavily because they saw huge potential in them. Now days, government gives incentives to massive corporations and imposes heavy taxes on small businesses. This should change. Small businesses are like the lungs of the economy, if you don’t nurture them, the economy will stop breathing.
All companies should adhere to the norms set by the government. They shouldn’t exploit the freedom that is granted to them. If any small business is found violating the norms, the government should be prompt in taking action against the respective business. This happens in many countries like China and India where businesses often exploit the labour laws and get away with it.
In conclusion, the government intervention should be minimal in the affairs of the small private businesses but they should make sure that these businesses adhere to the basic norms set by the government. It is the responsibility of the government to ensure that small businesses have the necessary opportunities to burgeon and flourish
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36196319018 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88863908502 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506134969325 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8772817041 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.823529412 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231600023574 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852633618023 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577529301857 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162470393127 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474324567234 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.