Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.
Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Every person in this world is unique and has his/her own unique experiences. Due to these experiences, everyone has their own way of perceiving different things in life. By interacting with many different people we come to know about their life stories and we get to know about their perspective regarding life in general. Well, some of the views shared by people are similar to our own views but some are not that similar. In my opinion, I disagree with the claim that we learn more from the people with whom we share similar views due to two reasons.
To begin with, growth takes place outside of our comfort zone. For instance, people from a certain country would always find it difficult to relate to foreign culture at first. Because in a way, people with whom we share similar views are our comfort zone. We feel comfortable sharing our views with them as we know they are going to agree with us in most of the cases. But after a certain point of time, one needs to get out of his/her comfort zone to get the perspective of the other side. By exposing ourselves to different perspective and thinking logically regarding them we can broaden our mindset and grow.
Secondly, contradictory views help understanding the way of thinking and mindest of the people better if we give it a deep thought. For example, if two people with opposite beliefs sit together and discuss the reasons for their respective beliefs they could get the idea of why the person on the opposite side has that belief.
Although, I agree to the reason for the given claim that it is stressful to discuss with people of the opposite views but in a way it is
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ent things in life. By interacting with many different people we come to know about their life...
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Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ective regarding life in general. Well, some of the views shared by people are similar to o...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em we can broaden our mindset and grow. Secondly, contradictory views help under...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to understand' or 'understand'.
Suggestion: to understand; understand
... Secondly, contradictory views help understanding the way of thinking and mindest of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in general, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 293.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60750853242 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4564133642 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491467576792 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6644192619 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4285714286 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.21951772744 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256072735403 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982065169856 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782435442284 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164357902538 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485056593566 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.