The two vital factors on educations are one is to choose the passionate field and second thing is to think rationally for the benefits ahead. Study in college is a task of long term goal which differ in different fields . The students must pursue course based on passion and interest. Jobs are based on cognitive skills in respective field and mental ability. Jobs are not easy to get in present competitive world but being passionate on a particular fetch a good job though the salary is more or less.
Choosing a job in non-passionate field leads life very unhappy and boredom. Every day of life might feel vexed and has to put laborious effort in disinterested field. Money does not motivate students, their passion motivate them and live a happy life, every day work with exuberance and being nonchalant in working. Choosing a job based on passion are venerated by society, employers and boss of company.
College students should not base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. Firstly,choice must be based on interest though there are availability of jobs. That is a risky work,it needs more hard work than smart work and vexed a lot with life and work pressure more might affect the health.
Conclusion,Choosing a job must be on choice along with interest , that is the most important thing in life .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, as to, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81896551724 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77277065945 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8813119078 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430332892036 0.243740707755 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180799260304 0.0831039109588 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.245076931419 0.0758088955206 323% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24593670316 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13672984724 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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