Political leaders are people made, they are elected and voted by people, political leaders are made to solve the problems of people faced severely, political leaders are venerated by people, they put a lot of belief on them that they would solve the problems of people, politcal leaders has to be flexible enough to solve the problems , they has change the decisions ,priorities and opinions based on the people problems, political leaders has to follow their own commitment and principles in the case of diasaters, demoralized, they have to push the people and themselves to uplift the the nation and get freedom from all the restricted rights for a good cause.
For example, Mahatma Gandhi , father of nation , who had committed to his principles such as non-violence, peace. Today , students also remember him for his principles, his commitment made to bring freedom for India on 1947, august fifteen, he motivated the people to follow the principles at any circumstances, he also fought for many severe problems faced by people, he is known for his principles.
Political leaders has to be flexible enough to change the decisions on problems, for example, Narendra Modi, a political leader , who has his own principles and commitments on problems to be solved in every year, but he changes his decisions based on the people majority , problems faced by most of the people, are more focused and much time and money is invested on the problem, though the commitments are not achieved, people most critical problems are solved.
In conclusion, political leaders has to yield public opinions and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. They have to follow their own rules and commitments to be achieved , and also flexible enough to change the decision base on public opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 293.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10580204778 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74631065654 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450511945392 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.360394804 60.3974514979 343% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 249.333333333 118.986275619 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8333333333 23.4991977007 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.21951772744 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248823897696 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165411032483 0.0831039109588 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136434238284 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181408855627 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757767399121 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 14.1392134831 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 48.8420337079 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.8971910112 488% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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