Technology is invented and developed by human, technology is an advantage for every person,technically sound people enhances technology,the statement given is complicate because without man there is no evolution of technology, without technology there is no future of man. people rely on technology to solve problems which cannot be solved by them within short period,technology is more an advantageous to present generation. Human abilities and cognitive skills are not suppress by the technology,in fact there is an increase in smart work of the people.
Technology is meant for smart work, less time consuming solutions, remedial solutions, accomplishing the work within seconds which does not need laborious effort, abilities of human are increased by technology, exploring the knowledge, education and enhancing of intellectual and cognitive skills, the deterioration is not a problem by technology. The way of utilization the technology is what varies in enhancement,the more smart work, less hard work. The usage of technology is beneficial in various ways. Smart tests working out in short time by using technology, learning skills with different techniques.
the abilities of human might increased by self learning using books ,it takes a lot of time to accomplish, Technology is where can abolish the problems, abilities of human depends on exploring, experiencing different issues that takes a lot of time o complete, a human brain works actively for four hours,the reduction in patience, vexing with issues, persisting for a long time, that may leads to unstable and vacillate with tasks because of no solution for different issues, long time to find solutions, laborious effort to complete, the effect on health.
Conclusion,human works on hard work,put a lot effort to complete work, the smart work needs to complete task in short time,this is where technology come into picture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , technically
...hnology is an advantage for every person,technically sound people enhances technology,the st...
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...nically sound people enhances technology,the statement given is complicate because w...
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Suggestion: complicated
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Suggestion: , technology
...ot be solved by them within short period,technology is more an advantageous to present gene...
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Suggestion: a more advantageous
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Suggestion: suppressed
... abilities and cognitive skills are not suppress by the technology,in fact there is an i...
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...kills are not suppress by the technology,in fact there is an increase in smart work...
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...y using technology, learning skills with different techniques. the abilities o...
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Suggestion: to use
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...ork needs to complete task in short time,this is where technology come into picture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 33.0505617978 15% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51712328767 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25136019575 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52397260274 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.856804078 60.3974514979 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.0 118.986275619 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4444444444 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176212966055 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813656996286 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580093603505 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108595973466 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589356675937 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 14.1392134831 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.