College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs

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College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.

students tend to choose courses based on the availability of jobs in the respective field rather than on their interest. However they end up dropping out from college or gain negligible knowledge due to their lack of interest.Hence students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them.

students who pursue subjects they are interested in end up excelling in those particular areas. they try to give their best and can create inventions that may help mankind. Elon Musk has invested much of his time on self driving cars though the market was very limited but he was able to create a billion dollar company Tesla which produces self driving cars. Curie was able to discover radium out of her interest in chemical research. radium is now used in many places like on vehicles and roads to prevent accidents, to make objects visible in dark.

Other reason could be students who take up subjects without interest may end up dropping out of college and it coud ruin their education. Studies suggest that eight percent of people who pursue courses based on job availability rather than interest have dropped out of college or have not passed in their exams.

interest is the key driving force for students to excel in their careers. it is evident that students should be encouraged to pursue courses they are interested in.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97345132743 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50045026879 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.181316473 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.181818182 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371873576224 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14973842217 0.0831039109588 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125098738873 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264700220454 0.150359130593 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123150063017 0.0667264976115 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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