In the human history educators have been seen as a major change makers. That is why this profession deservingly receives undying reverence from their peers and from the society as well.The prompt suggests that all the professors in universities and colleges should be made work in their course subject affiliated professions outside the academic world. While it is necessary for professors to invest their time in research and innovation in their respective field, but giving away their valuable time to professions other than research-based professions will make them unavailable for the need of students and also will make them commercial.
Professors should practice novel researches and guide their students in this regard. This is an imperative part of teaching roles at university level. A countries new innovations and sound prosperity vastly depend upon it. For example, we often see that people who receives Nobel prizes in various sectors are often university professors. This is an example of how professors shape the world by their novel innovations. When an eduactor research in his respective field he/she gets much more in-depth knowledge which he/she can convey to the students while teaching them.So, this is required for professors to invest in their research career.
Nevertheless, despite the above mentioned professions expending their time in non-research based professions might not be fruitful.As an example, if professors works as a consultanat in a big company, he might not able to be sufficiently focus on his/her teaching role. The professor might be extremely busy and eventually fail to response to students need. In that case spending time in this kind of profession will neither help the students nor the society in terms of prosperity.
Again, when big companies hire professors with Doctorate degrees in their consultancy services they might offer them fairly more remuneration than the their professor job. This can make faculties much more commercial as they get an opportunity to be opulent in a easy way. And might also make them unavailable for the need of teaching and innovation.
Therefore, professors should only invest time in research work because investing time other than this profession might not bring good for the overall welfare of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: didn't
...de range of various genres of music but didnt stated if every genre has skilled tutor...
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...ome of the most prominent musicians, it doesnt provide information on the number of tu...
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...not have proper educating capabilities. If either of the case is true the authors ...
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...r of the case is true the authors claim doesnt stand out. Finally, having recognation...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...ight get sponsorship to make music that doesnt fit moral aspects. And there is also no...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ne or two have made success by fortune. If either of the case is true the music sc...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...er of the case is true the music school cant claim their graduates would be qualifie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1469816273 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66303201573 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490813648294 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0552130017 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1363636364 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3181818182 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0207968788123 0.243740707755 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0068553542751 0.0831039109588 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0152889709211 0.0758088955206 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0156155699007 0.150359130593 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130335148263 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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