Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
The recommendation claims that Teachers and Professors in colleges and universities need to have experiences in professions related to their academic discipline but outside their direct academic world. This policy, if enforced, will upgrade the quality of teaching and pupils' learning experiences. Therefore, I agree with the author's claim to the extent that it doesnot hurt the teachers' and professors' interests.
To begin with, a practical experience with the outside world always gives one, more insight and helps a person in developing a more discerning eye with which they view the world. For example, a person trained in the discipline of Sociology will definitely be a great teacher if they already had experiences in dealing with societal problems firsthand. A person who has worked with Non-Governmental Organizations working on issues like education of children, gender issues, trafficking and so on, will gather much rich experiences. These people, when they later take up jobs as a professor in a university provides students with rich knowledge of these experiences.
Similarly, a person trained as a doctor and working in hospitals in the first years of their career would serve as wonderful teachers to their students. These doctor professors would impart practical, instead of only theoretical knowledge of how to diagnose a disease or how to interact with their patients, to the future doctors in the making. However, for a doctor, once they have worked in practical situations which demand great alacrity and constant skill building, might find the job of a teacher slightly boring. Imposing this policy on people like those, would then frustrate the professors rather than interest them.
To sum it up, this policy of trying to broaden the knowledge scope of teachers and professors of colleges and universities by exposing them to related professsions outside the academic world seems workable only if both students and teachers find it profiting. Otherwise, this might become an imposition on both the groups. There are people who spend their entire life trying to be a good teacher. This process involves more and more experience with teaching and dealing with students and other faculty members. Working in other professions might take away their interest in teaching and they might not return to the teaching profession ever.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36559139785 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86029968951 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3136645828 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193244089533 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628674708332 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064590706883 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127794808343 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632261072956 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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