Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
A Government is a system or group of people governing an organized community, often a state. Government is a means by which organizational policies are enforced as well as a mechanism for determining policy. Maintaining peace and welfare of the people is the fundamental purpose of the Government. It is important that the Government of a country deal with its immediate problems that is plaguing its nation before it focuses on far-fetched anticipated problems that might or might not occur in future.
To begin with, India is beset by economic, social and cultural issues like poverty, unemployment, violence on women and children, caste violence, terrorist attacks, Illiteracy, health problems, water scarcity, the Kashmir issue etcetera. For example, India needs to find efficient ways to restore normalcy in Kashmir after the Government scraped article 370 and imposed a lockdown in the state for months now.
Secondly, our nation is beleaguered by terrorist activities. The recent heinous attack in Pulwama, Kashmir, is one such example. It is heart-wrenching to see our soldiers dying in insidious, suicide attacks by terrorists and not even getting a chance to defend themselves. They were ambushed in the middle of the night, caught in their most unguarded state. It is the responsibility of the Government to take appropriate security measures much before, given this is not the first attack on our soldiers and our nation. Instead of putting focus and splurging crores on upcoming election developments, the Government needs to utilize its power and resources to bolster the armed forces in combating and preventing any such further attacks on the Nation and especially preventing a nuclear war between the two nations.
Most importantly, there are economic problems, that our Government is facing currently. No longer can India be called the fastest growing economy. Data indicate a slowdown in growth to a six-year low of 5 percent. In fact, the economy has been made to come to this stage by the actions of the Government itself, in its over-ambitious, anticipated demonetization experiment conducted on Indian citizens to get rid of black money. No intellectuals to date had supported this and lampooned its adverse impact on small, medium and unorganized sectors of society. Instead of putting India through this unnecessary ordeal the Government needs to focus on current unattended problems mentioned in the beginning. The country isn't in a very good position as compared to other countries in these aspects.
However, a substantial amount of awareness is needed on the part of the government regarding future problems like the issue of climate change. Various human activities are are adversely affecting the entire ecosystem. Floods, earthquakes, droughts and famines are a result of this. Government needs to brace itself up and take preventive measures as well as mitigating measures against these natural and man-made disasters.
To sum up, India is still fraught with myriad social problems and issues which hinder its progress. As far as social developments are concerned India is one of the lowest ranked countries of the world. India's Human Development Index rank 2013 is 135 out of 187 countries of the world. Thus, the Government first needs to address these looming, entrenched hurdles, so that the country can make conspicuous strides in fields of science, economy and technology. Solving the present problems will in turn give strength to the Government to efficiently tackle future dangers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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...mentioned in the beginning. The country isnt in a very good position as compared to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
...limate change. Various human activities are are adversely affecting the entire ecosyste...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s and issues which hinder its progress. As far as social developments are concerne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for example, in fact, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2982.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 558.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34408602151 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98640791116 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 920.7 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.2795317975 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184131991974 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041232285627 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650309263838 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921992269575 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660213822172 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 176.0 100.480337079 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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