A Government is a system or group of people governing an organized community, often a state. Government is a means by which organizational policies are enforced as well as a mechanism for determining policy. Maintaining peace and welfare of the people is the fundamental purpose of the Government. It is important that the Government of a country deal with its immediate problems that is plaguing its nation instead of far-fetched imaginary that might or might not occur in future.
To begin with, right now our nation is beleaguered by terrorist activities. The recent heinous attack in Pulwama, Kashmir, is one such example. It is heart-wrenching to see our soldiers dying in insidious, suicide attacks by terrorists and not even getting a chance to defend themselves. They were ambushed in the middle of the night, caught in their most unguarded state. It is the responsibility of the Government to take appropriate security measures much before, given this is not the first attack on our soldiers and our nation. Instead of putting focus and splurging crores on upcoming election developments, the Government needs to utilize its power and resources to bolster the armed forces in combating and preventing any such further attacks on the Nation and especially preventing a nuclear war between the two nations.
Additionally there are economic problems, that our Government is facing currently. No longer can India be called the fastest growing economy. Infact, the economy has been made to come to this stage by the actions of the Government itself, in its over-ambitious, anticipated demonetization experiment conducted on Indian citizens to get rid of black money. No intellectuals to date had supported this and lampooned its adverse impact on small, medium and unorganized sectors of society. Instead of putting India through this unnecessary ordeal the Government needs to focus on current unattended problems like poverty, illiteracy, crime against women and children, minorities, and health problems, and last but not the least is the problem of climate change. The country isn't in a very good position as compared to other countries in these aspects.
To sum up, India is still fraught with myriad social problems and issues which hinder its progress. As far as social developments are concerned India is one of the lowest ranked countries of the world. India's Human Development Index rank 2013 is 135 out of 187 countries of the world. Thus, the Government first needs to address these looming, entrenched hurdles, so that the country can make conspicuous strides in fields of science, economy and technology. Solving the present problems will in turn give strength to the Government to efficiently tackle future dangers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 472, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...imaginary that might or might not occur in future. To begin with, right now our natio...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...uclear war between the two nations. Additionally there are economic problems, that our G...
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Line 5, column 771, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... problem of climate change. The country isnt in a very good position as compared to ...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s and issues which hinder its progress. As far as social developments are concerne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, still, thus, well, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27397260274 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98906146449 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573059360731 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0549650593 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154798259475 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393261849619 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467378980335 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927855364323 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379048638887 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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