Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
The issue of whether colleges and universities should require to spend time working outside the professional world in their profession relevant to the courses they teach is contentious one. I strongly concede with the speaker assertion that spending time outside the academic world would provide them immense knowledge and ideas about the different changes in the subject matters going on on the global area which will definitely help them to make competitive and uniform regarding their subjects.
Turning to the first threshold claim is that with the increase in science and technology, rapid changes can be seen in the society. For instance, if the students of Sociology only remain confined and restricted to the bookish knowledge of their university subject which traditionally based, then he will be lacked regarding noble information that is prevailed in the society. Therefore, any universities and colleges students should be radical and tactful so as to be in touch with the recent changes of the society. As a result, they can make their knowledge uniform and such information acquired by them can be used in their research papers which they tried eruditely to published. Hence, it is the responsibility of every students to make enthusiasm so as to make them cope with the recent changes going around on the society.
Turning to the second threshold claim is that without spending any time outside the academic world make the universities and colleges students completely obtuse. As a result, they will be unable to cope with the recent development happened in their subjects. Such obtuseness may provide deleterious results in the upcoming future. For instance, incompetent and imperceptive scholars who can't handle the changes going on their subject matter may lack in every steps of their life. Similarly, it will be quite difficult for them so as to get highly qualified jobs after accomplishment of their students. Moreover, they will feel guilty even though they possess high percentage in their academic carrier. Thus, every colleges and universities should spend few of their time outside the academic world in their relevant subject matters.
Some argue that it will be quite unfruitful for students to spend their time outside their academic world. They believed that students who are in universities and colleges should do labor hard so as to achieve high grades. Similarly, they added that the universities study require high priority and concentration. Therefore, spending outside the academic world means distraction from their subject matters. As a result, students may divert from their regular routine which provide inimical result in their study. However, this point is flawed since only concentrating in course books means less accumulation of knowledge regarding the current changes happening in their subject matters. Thus, every erudite students should make them radical so as to keep them touch in the recent changes happening outside their college and universities environment. Such alertness in their behavior will facilitate large enough to achieve success in their relevant field.
To sum up, it is the duty of every universities and colleges students to be familiar with the courses outside the academic world. But on doing so, they mustn't forget about the curriculum prescribed by their universities as such curriculum provide them accurate path A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
regarding their field of study.
Should all the students of nation require to study under the same national curriculum until they enter college? I agree in so far with the speaker claim that studying under the same national curriculum creates less chance of getting biased and thereby, further increase the feeling of mutual co-operation and brotherhood among all the students. However, in certain cases, separate communal curriculum should also be designed by viewing the circumstances of certain tribes and nationalities.
The first reason for my agreement with the speaker is that teaching all the students of nation under the same curriculum helps to enhance the feeling of patriotism. As a result, such students will be strongly motivated so as to build the common trust and understanding. Due to this reason, they can understand the sentiments of each people. Hence, the sovereignty of nation will get strengthen and prosperity of development and common interest can be fulfilled easily. For instance, students who are under such framework can lead the nation in every stage of change taking place in the global arena. Therefore, every country should be extremely motivated so as to introduce the same national syllabus all across the geographical territory of the nation.
The second reason for my agreement with the speaker assertion is that providing different communal based syllabus to the different race of the people may bring some sort of class among them. Because of this, the chaotic scenario may build with the nation. Hence, in order to safeguard nation from this inauspicious situation, every person in governmental organization should designed that curriculum which is acceptable and understood by the people from different races and tribes. Similarly, implementing the same curriculum until they enter college can save the cost of nation so that surfeit amount of nation would be saved. Therefore, it seem wise to implement and forecast same curriculum all across the country.
Some may argue that designing same curriculum may not sound suitable to the certain races and tribes of the people. For instance, in Nepal, different races and religions of people live together at the same place. Therefore, people who follow Buddhism may practices Buddhist oaths and wordings. So, under such condition, implementation of same national level curriculum can hurt the sentiment of such followers. Therefore, government of nation should be wise enough so as to understand the sentiments and feeling of such tribal groups. However, this point is flawed since designing and prescribing different curriculum may increase the financial burden of the government at one hand and on the other hand may bring the situation of differences among the citizens which may further increases the gap between different racial groups. Thus, it sound wise to design same nation curriculum for student before they enter college.
To sum up, a nation should build same national curriculum so as to build trust and understanding in between their citizens. However, in some respect, separate curricula should also be designed so as to give priority to certain religious groups of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, sort of, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 45.0 12.4196629213 362% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 37.0 14.8657303371 249% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 84.0 33.0505617978 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 168.0 58.6224719101 287% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 34.0 12.9106741573 263% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5948.0 2235.4752809 266% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1110.0 442.535393258 251% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35855855856 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.77205877464 4.55969084622 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80024811358 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 402.0 215.323595506 187% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.362162162162 0.4932671777 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1837.8 704.065955056 261% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 50.0 20.2370786517 247% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9836261777 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.96 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.62 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.97078651685 241% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24563584333 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698741783617 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110652251601 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120610691221 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125616169135 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 220.0 100.480337079 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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