Governments officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve

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Governments officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.

The speaker make a threshold that governments officials who are engaged in different governing bodies should strong rely on their own judgement rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve. I strongly concede with the speaker claim that governments employee should be well institutionalized and autonomous in order to carry out different decision which they pursue in their working field without biasing the people of different races, ethnics groups and religion.
Turning first to the speaker threshold claim that government officers should be strongly qualified and capable of taking justifiable decision while doing their duties in their working sites. For instance, government employee who work in National Electricity Department must carry out their jobs efficient without creating bias situation towards the general public. Thus, in order to do so, they must keep their strong connectivity with the people living over that area in which they work. Moreover, such employee should be capable of taking radical judgement on the field in which they pursue their duty so as to provide efficient services towards the local citizen over that area. Therefore, such leadership skills must be there with such employee so that local people may keep faith in them.
Turning to the second point, government officials should work in their jobs taking the sentiments and ideology of general people. For instance, if their working nature is hurdled by the emotion and feeling of the people then they will be lacked in making effective judgement which will ultimately threatened them in accomplishing their undergoing work in desired time period. Similarly, government candidates should also make their own strategic plans and schedules while doing their jobs in certain local area. On doing so, it will obviously facilitated them during their working tenure. Hence, it is true that governments personnel should rely on their own judgments.

In sum, different government employees should carry out their own judgement quite efficiently taking the justifiable ideas and suggestions from the general public so that each citizen of the people keep their faith in government bodies. While doing so, equitable and peaceful country can be designed where none of the individuals felt biased from the governing bodies of the nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
The speaker make a threshold that governments officials ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...gly concede with the speaker claim that governments employee should be well institutionaliz...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...out creating bias situation towards the general public. Thus, in order to do so, they must kee...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which they work. Moreover, such employee should be capable of taking radical judg...
^^
Line 2, column 605, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e field in which they pursue their duty so as to provide efficient services towards the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'facilitate'
Suggestion: facilitate
...al area. On doing so, it will obviously facilitated them during their working tenure. Hence...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... working tenure. Hence, it is true that governments personnel should rely on their own judg...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tifiable ideas and suggestions from the general public so that each citizen of the people keep...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42739726027 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67304610044 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468493150685 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5128608978 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 5.21951772744 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401868704298 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168545965611 0.0831039109588 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133454632871 0.0758088955206 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284385325833 0.150359130593 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111762963085 0.0667264976115 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
The speaker make a threshold that governments officials ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...gly concede with the speaker claim that governments employee should be well institutionaliz...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...out creating bias situation towards the general public. Thus, in order to do so, they must kee...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which they work. Moreover, such employee should be capable of taking radical judg...
^^
Line 2, column 605, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e field in which they pursue their duty so as to provide efficient services towards the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'facilitate'
Suggestion: facilitate
...al area. On doing so, it will obviously facilitated them during their working tenure. Hence...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... working tenure. Hence, it is true that governments personnel should rely on their own judg...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tifiable ideas and suggestions from the general public so that each citizen of the people keep...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42739726027 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67304610044 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468493150685 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5128608978 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 5.21951772744 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401868704298 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168545965611 0.0831039109588 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133454632871 0.0758088955206 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284385325833 0.150359130593 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111762963085 0.0667264976115 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.