Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
The presented issue is states that "Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country". On one hand, it will cost a lot to send a student to foreign country. On the other hand, student will get a great exposure. This is thus, a very contentious issue and needs meticulous analyses to reach a conclusion. However, in my view, a universities should not require a student to spend at least one semester studying in foreign country.
Firstly, most of the students or their parents do not have financial position to pay the tuition fees and other expenses including living conditions, food, textbooks that may be required to study the courses etc. For example, for a student studying in developing country, he would have to pay a huge amount as tuition fees to just get into a good university. If the student can not afford to pay the fees, then he or she would have to compromise with a university where fees is low but so is the quality of education. As for the developed countries, they already offer highest level of education. Hence, there is no point to pay extra and study from a university lower in rank than they are already studying.
Secondly, the primary purpose of a student to go and study in a foreign university is to get the most out of it. However, because of enormous fees along with other expenses mentioned above, the student might have to work in order to compensate this huge sum of money. For example, a student might have to work in a nearby restaurant as a waiter. He would have to directly report to the restaurant after university timings. This means that a student may not be able to devote time to study or he would have to stay awake till late of the night to compensate. Either ways, student will suffer (either in terms of grades or in terms of health due to lack of sleep).
However, some may argue that the amount of exposure you get is commendable. Not only that, usually a student gets adapted to be with collegues who have similar interest and intellectual as that of him or her. This makes a student lack creativity. Furthermore, the amount of knowledge gained by studying in high rated universites is enourmous. However, with growing technology, outreach has easened and world has become a smalled place. A student can always join a community with students have varied interests. Student can always opt for online courses offered by many online platforms such as coursera, udacity etc. The student can join their community to increase network and exposure. In fact, working with them may enhance a students critical thinking.
In conclusion, local universities should not focus on sending students to study in foreign country, but should focus on bringing the experience to local university and increasing the quality of education they provide.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a university' or simply 'universities'?
Suggestion: a university; universities
...each a conclusion. However, in my view, a universities should not require a student to spend a...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'offer the highest'.
Suggestion: offer the highest
...r the developed countries, they already offer highest level of education. Hence, there is no ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
... In fact, working with them may enhance a students critical thinking. In conclusion, lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as for, at least, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83910386965 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74237292428 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466395112016 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 752.4 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6610674609 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8846153846 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40305446513 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111920899518 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167943493304 0.0758088955206 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243962182844 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197831615167 0.0667264976115 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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