Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Now a days, there are many educational institutions opened to guide the students. A good educational institution plays important role in student’s life. But I disagree with the statement. Student should choose his or her field by looking at his or her interest. Educational institute should give advice instead of encouraging student to take certain field.
First of all, No one better than student himself/herself knows his/her true potential. So I think student should be one choosing field of their own interest because at the end if a person is not interested in doing certain thing than he will not get self-satisfaction which may lead to huge failure and it may lead to depression. For instant, if Sachine Tendulkar was encourage to sing or to be engineer than we would have not known about his existences. But he end up choosing the field in which he is more interested in and results are in front of us he is the best batsman of his era.
Secondly, if a student is encourage to take such a field in which he/she is least interested and he/she chooses that field because everyone is taking and has scope, than while perceiving career in that field he/she may encounter many failures and that student may get in the state of depression and start doing ill deeds which is very harmful for society and for himself/herself. For instance let’s assume that person choose the field in which he was list interested and encounter many failure and get into state of depression, to come out of it or to reduce that pain he/she started smoking, drinking and got addicted to drugs at small age. Then it will be very difficult for everyone to get him/her out of it and such addictions are first step towards crime.
In conclusion, educational institute should advice student instead of encouraging them to take a field of study. Students should choose only that field in which they are really interested in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, there are many educational institution...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, there are many educational institution...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
.... For instant, if Sachine Tendulkar was encourage to sing or to be engineer than we would...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'singing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: singing
...ant, if Sachine Tendulkar was encourage to sing or to be engineer than we would have no...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'ends'.
Suggestion: ends
... not known about his existences. But he end up choosing the field in which he is mo...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
... his era. Secondly, if a student is encourage to take such a field in which he/she is...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
... Secondly, if a student is encourage to take such a field in which he/she is least i...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun failure seems to be countable; consider using: 'many failures'.
Suggestion: many failures
...ch he was list interested and encounter many failure and get into state of depression, to co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ddictions are first step towards crime. In conclusion, educational institute sho...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...onclusion, educational institute should advice student instead of encouraging them to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n which they are really interested in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84194528875 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79395959457 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498480243161 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.2522854061 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.785714286 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.21951772744 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323560922299 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131251381967 0.0831039109588 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942312238115 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244423425889 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925515235895 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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