Educators should teach facts only after their students have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts.
Education is the most important aspect in a person’s life.Education empowers the person to differentiate between right and wrong and to lead a better life.Hence it becomes the responsibility of the educators to teach in a way which simplifies complex concepts and facilitates better understanding.I disagree with the author as some facts are just fact , they do not help in developing a better understanding of the idea.Also some facts which do accompany the idea are subjective as it depends on the individual if he/she wants to study it or not.
Firstly, in today’s competitive world where everything is associated with some kind of exams. Every student tries to excel in those irrespective of the fact whether they are actually learning anything. They just briefly understand the idea and apply those to the concepts relevant to their exams.For instance, in mathematics everyone knows about the idea or concept of Pythagoras theorem. Once the formula of this theorem is explained to the student they will start applying it to their relevant questions. No student bothers the fact how it was discovered or the fact that how Pythagoras theorem is used in real life problems. They just want to learn the concept and get done with the exams.
Secondly,in fields like history and geography facts are usually not accompanied with any concept or ideas. They are just plain facts of past or the present world.These type of facts are not in conjunction with some logical concepts.For instance, if we consider the Eiffel tower . Historically it can be said that Eiffel Tower was built in some year.Geographically we can say that Eiffel Tower is in Paris.Both these facts are universally accepted. The idea on which the Eiffel tower was built is rarely known to a few people.
However, in the scientific and technological world to understand some facts one has to develop a cogent understanding of concepts , ideas and trends. As these concepts do build a foundation upon which the facts lie.For instance, in todays technological world it is a fact that most of the websites that we see are build on some kind of programming language like Java , Python,PHP to name a few.In order to build those websites one should have an in depth understanding of the concepts of these programming languages. The nuances of these languages should be known which would help in building something unique.
In conclusion, there are some fields in which plain facts are considered without understanding any concepts or ideas and some fields which require the understanding of concepts to better understand facts.The end goal is increasing knowledge which should be ensured in both cases.
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- Argument Topic The following appears in a letter to the editor for the West Lansburg News The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions Since they were d 73
- Educators should teach facts only after their students have studied the ideas trends and concepts that help explain those facts 58
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 66
- The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend Of the two leading real estate firms in our town Adams Realty and Fitch Realty Adams Realty is clearly superior Adams has 40 real estate agents in contrast Fitch has 25 many of whom work only 58
- If we want to save money on municipal garbage disposal fees we need to encourage our residents to recycle more Late last year our neighboring town Hayesworth passed a law requiring that all households recycle paper and glass or pay a fine Since that time 74
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 437.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16247139588 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03138899931 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464530892449 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.183393871 60.3974514979 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.4 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1333333333 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331637092495 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108707569783 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593992741876 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178723210141 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519164980951 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 11.8971910112 273% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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