With the beginning of the Industrial revolution, the economic and financial growth is rapidly rising. Our dependence on technology has also risen to cater the needs of higher efficiency. However the effects of such rampant growth hasn't been observable until lately, the effects are far to high to be repudiated. In such a case it is viable to have certain environmental protection laws in place to keep a check on industries that produce harmful and toxic effluents in the form of air, water or solid wastes. Thus I strongly believe that environmental protection policies are our only hope in curbing these ill effects and they must be made applicable to all corporations big and small.
To begin with it is natural for corporations to think about their economic benefits over the ill effects it produces. This is clearly evident with the fact that pharmaceutical companies dump the waste in rivers and lakes which in turn has deteriorating health of the people living nearby. This is a common theme in most of the developing nations where production of medicines and drugs take place. In such a case, shouldn't environmental protection policies be applicable?
Another factor is the cost. Corporations argue that the protection policies would lead them to increase the prices of products due to the added costs of safely disposing the waste. This is infeasible for the customers at large. But, won't having having an environmental policy force them to adopt new cleaner ways? Anyways, the corporations wouldn't adopt cleaner methods by choice; so having a environmental policy would in fact force them to approach new better ways of production to have higher profit margins.
Implementation of these policies could have ill effects too such as noncompliance of industries which would affect the production as well as jobs in the region. This could affect the regional economics and could bring to a standstill. This however could be resolved with the collaboration of both the government and the corporations. Rather than a sudden enforcement of restrictions on the corporation, certain milestones can be set. An example of this collaboration is the Paris Accords on climate change and the Kyoto protocol which is a legally binding protocol signed by many countries to curb their overall emissions in set targets. Thus a collaboration is helpful in establishing such policies.
In conclusion it can be said that no matter the economic growth, a clean environment is of more importance and collaborative efforts would lead to the successful implementation of such policies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19424460432 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06479511191 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532374100719 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.654437571 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296069724268 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807086141545 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807849846234 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153694287442 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518518678225 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.