Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
To prevent a society from becoming chaos, laws are playing a momentous role. Laws keep society as a union to thrive in its high value purposes. Therefore, it’s an oblige for every single member of a society to abide by the just laws, however, the unjust laws need more attention but not disobedient.
Separating the laws to the two groups of the just laws and the unjust laws is not a unique concept. Each individual might consider several laws as the just laws and other ones as the unjust laws. We should have a common definition for the unjust laws to have a deeper examination around this statement. The unjust laws would be the laws that do not help the whole society to be happy and satisfied due to the harmful thought behind them.
The just laws are regulated by sophisticated individuals who spend the majority of their lifetimes to study about the advantages and disadvantages of the just laws. People should obey these just laws to keep the society safe and prepared to advance. For instance, all the traffic lights consider people’s safety and they should abbey the rules behind the concept of them. Stopping behind the red light is necessary to be safe and disobey these laws have dangerous consequences. Therefore, regulators consider fines to prevent drivers from repeating the same false action.
On the other hand, a society might have several unjust laws that require people to pay attention to them. They should ask themselves whether these laws would harm any groups of society or not. The slavery was that kind of unjust laws that was unacceptable for a majority of the society in America. It was imperative that every individual to consider that law as an unjust law. With the slavery law, African American citizens did not live happily and they suffered racism. Therefor, this unjust law needs to reexamine and individuals who understood the dire circumstances of African American citizens began to protest. Disobedient is not a helpful way to stop the unjust laws because each disobedient would lead to a chaos society, however, peaceful movements and protests are necessary to grab the regulator’s attention about the wrong facts behind each unjust law.
To sum up, obedient of the just laws is the responsibility of each member of a society while the unjust laws need reconsideration. Disobedient is not acceptable for any kind of law, but being critical and participate to the peaceful movements would be useful to stop and change the unjust laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ts high value purposes. Therefore, it’s an oblige for every single member of a society to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95465393795 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68991429134 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448687350835 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8078846145 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296108753836 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115253291824 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618200641678 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19947178156 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405724704031 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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