Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure

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Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position

Residing in a society, obeying laws is the fundamental duty of an individual as a part of that society, provided the laws to be justifiable. Every individual has fundamental duties to perform and fundamental rights that he/she can exercise. Obeying justifiable law is a fundamental duty whereas it is in the fundamental rights of an individual to question the validity of an unjust law and can repudiate to obey. Case of women activists in UAE resisting against the very rule of wearing a hijab exemplifies the position of the forced application of an unjust law upon Arabian women. Example of unjust laws being forced upon the people irrespective of the fact that what is the achievable purpose of the law.

Some people argue that every law is made for the welfare of society, but that isn't correct. People often use power unjustly and make things to favour that same power.

Looking at our everyday lives, there are many rules to notice which are being questioned about their justification. In a society, there are principles which people follow and expect others to do the same. Rules like not to conduct any noisy activity after late night, or not to bring pets in an apartment where the elderly are also living, make sense as there are valid reasons behind them. late-night parties may cause disruption and disturb neighbours, and sometimes old people are allergic to pets. But at the same time, there are rules like no bachelors are allowed, or we see this in the society parks that children are not allowed to play outdoor games because it will make the grass uprooted, these rules are absurd and exemplify the case when people with power forcing the laws just to make things go "their" way - this is not how a society works, there is no "their" or "me" or "I", there is only "us" and "we". Like Abraham Lincoln once said, government of the people, government by the people, and government for the people. And, isn't society is a form of democratic body? I say yes.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93313953488 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89395287505 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.221111105 60.3974514979 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132269758654 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481203627049 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391284777692 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859752772374 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441649566821 0.0667264976115 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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