Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Nowadays, there is a different view of the issue about every individual should obey and disobey the laws of just and unjust. Depending on personal experiences and beliefs, we may find some people hold the opinion that they think people have the responsibility to do this, while others have an opposite attitude that using individual experience or feeling to judge laws which are just or unjust and then to decide whether they want to obey or not is not a good idea. As far as I am concerned, I believe that we have the responsibility to obey the laws but cannot decide whether we should follow laws or not by ourself. My view will be explored in the following discussion.
First of all, people have the responsibility to obey the laws in their country. And it makes sense that we want to follow the right laws which are justice and will protect us. For example, In my country, we have a very strange law wanting to pass it. However, this law has no benefit to us, and many adolescents think that if the law is confirmed by legislators, it will definitely hurt our country and their future. So that they stand out and fight on streets to ask the government to recall the law. This is a very clear example that people will easily to follow the concept which mentions in the statement.
On the other hand, when we talk about laws which are just and unjust, we have to ask what justice is? Although we always want to have a right judgment, what is the right judgment in-laws? Different people have a different view on different things, and it is hard to say which view is right and which is not. Therefore, if we only use our personal experience or the point of view to make the decision whether we are going to comply with laws or not, it will make the country a mess. Perhaps, people will form many different small of groups with the same concept and against with others finally, and it is not what we wonder to see it.
Instead of using the personal mind to take this responsibility, the best way we should do is to establish a well-developed legislation system to let everybody could participate the decisions of laws and make sure the law must be right or even defined what the just is. The system will not only let people have the consensus about the right laws but also could help us to filter laws which are already made or going to make that are not justice and then modify them.
In conclusion, despite the fact that people will have the consensus to present such behavior, there are still many factors we should consider discreetly. Thus, we cannot presumptuously believe the statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54468085106 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52790671476 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436170212766 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.058206409 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.421052632 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7368421053 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196811841818 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771679201548 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982172127656 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117532120044 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103640865742 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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