Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
The statement supports that every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws. In my opinion, I disagree with the claim for several reasons. The constitution that exist in our country is the result of the democracy, which means that the population voted for the politics that are creating, innovating, improving the laws. Hence, as we voted for those people, and the democracy is a political system which there is no distinctive between people, all individuals must obey all the kind of laws, just and unjust laws.
To clarify my opinion, imagine two people that drink a glass of wine and decide to drive afterwards. one is dizzy, crash his car into a store and kill a person. Another is felling completely fine, but he was spotted by the police and were asked to check the percentage of alcohol in his body. As he drunk a wine glass, he went to jail. if you ask the second person, obviously he would say that is unfair because he is felling in perfect conditions to drive. but if you ask the first individual, he would say that he was wrong about driving and committed a mistake. Both individuals ingested the same amount of alcohol percentage, but one was not felling in good conditions and the other was.
The government can not apply the dry law considering if the individual is strong enough or not drinking alcohol. it is wrong to drive when you drink alcohol not only because of you, but other’s safety. it can be unjust for the person who did not crashed his car into something or someone. but what if he did? For this reasons laws must be obeyed by everyone and not distinguished who deserves or not to follow.
On the other hand, if you disagree with some law, you should try to claim it, not resist. For example, abortion law. In some states of United states, you can not have an abortion. if you have an opinion that the couple or woman are the only ones who need to decide if they are ready or not to have a child, and its their decision to have a abortion, trying to resist is the worse idea. Going to outlaw clinics can harm the woman’s body, because normally this clinics do not have infrastructure enough to help a woman if she collapses or have some trouble in the middle of the procedure. therefore trying to resist this law can only increase the number of woman that dies trying to abort. In Brazil, as is against the law having an abortion, many woman are trying to convert this situation doing manifestations in the streets, undersigned documents to get to the legislative power.
Given the above, in can be concluded that every individual has a responsibility to obey just and unjust laws, such as dry law and abortion law. Mainly if the country are ruled by democracy, the majority of the population voted for the politicians that are making our laws. therefore it is a fair condition. Further, in the same way, trying to resist the laws can only damage the constitution. As the laws are for everyone, it can not be eligible only for some people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2503.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 546.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58424908425 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61537435485 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454212454212 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 808.2 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0241800139 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3928571429 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295176002832 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844838308462 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175081228129 0.0758088955206 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186739012616 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160293394162 0.0667264976115 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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