Financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.
After education revolution, All universities has different type of course and all courses leads towards different life. However if a person doesn't agree with author's statement then he is making mistake which can cost him and his family as it leads his life in bad way.
If person gives most importance to financial gain for choosing career then it will lead happy and secure life for him and his family too. By having good paying job in hand he can satisfy all the needs for his family. A person with well bank balance can provide good education and health to his family and possess good amount money for emergencies situation. Sometimes, This kind of high paying job may be onerous but that will bring a wonderful moment in life afterwards. So, financial gain is most important factor in choosing a career.
Financial gain can also leads satisfactional and comfortable life as person can take vacation and tours. A person can arrange a party and do show off. A person with great financial conditions can invest in new technology and tools which afterall makes life more comfortable. Suppose if a person has a great hobby in car. In college days he has chance to choose career as banking manager which is high paying job though he chose low paying job of car because of his hobbies. Now, if he had chosen bank manager job then he could buy car but now, he has only responsibility of cleaning them. A false dicision and not considering financial gain may give short term satisfaction. But as time goes and it faded where money related problems becomes real. So, a students has to give most priority to financial gain of any career.
Some may argue that if we choose financial gain as most important factor then what about his own life. If a person just choose to make money for securing his children's future then what about his own interest and happiness. However, we have many examle where a person failed miserably to achieve success in his own field of interest and get depressed and some times interest goes away with time. In other way, after achieving success in other high paying jobs and focus on financial gains make yourself in better position. After that person can spend his free time pursuing hobbies. We have example of many businessmen who started in job somewhere in other branch and earn money after that they pursue own choice of of hobbies. So, As Peter Thiel once said If you don't have money in your pocket then you can't bring changes by just your words. So, if a person wants to choose career, he has to consider interest, chance of success in that and most importantly financial gain. Cause without financial gain and spending life in pecuniary just makes person stressed and miserable. This type of person doesn't lead better future for his own children and so for country. Thus, financial condition is most important status nowadays.
If we give great example of many engineer and scientist, we thinks as them revolutioner though they give same importance to money. Because despite of their work for country. No one is going to give them free service. They are pursuing their interest however they first consider monetory condition of that job and othe accomodation provided by company or government. One wise man said, love your job not the job place because job is helping you to run your house not your boss. So, if a person has skills for earning he can do anything that will him and his family life better, secure and happy.
So, as we disscuss if student does not consider choosing career with financial gain over pursuing his interest which afterall leads him bad and stressed life. So, always pursue career after considering financial gain of that perticular field. Because this is the most important factor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...inancial gain of that perticular field. Because this is the most important factor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, as to, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3106.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 650.0 442.535393258 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77846153846 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04926703274 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43487676322 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432307692308 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 961.2 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 3.10617977528 419% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.2370786517 178% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6928778369 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2777777778 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30555555556 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272320039182 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980557074295 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152177164445 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171733680239 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128547997234 0.0667264976115 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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