financial support to other city
Major cities are the backbone of any country, as they provide employment to a lot of people, a major contributor to the country's economy. And all this cannot be possible without government financial support.
Investors from all over the world try to invest in major cities of any country. Many people come from various places in the country in search of employment, as they will get a lot of opportunities in these cities. They are the hub for various MNC and most of the startups were started there only, for Example, California is among the major cities of the USA and most of the startups that are now a big giant in the corporate world were stated there only like Google, Facebook, Microsoft, etc. For a country to make its major cities popular among the tourist, investors, they have to provide financial support to these cities so they can thrive.
Providing financial assistance to these cities does not mean focus on these cities only and doing nothing for others. Yes, the government has to focus more on major cities as they are contributing more to the growth of a country in various ways, but they also try to make other cities of a country as their major one. And for this, they have to focus on other cities also, by providing financial support to them, for example, the GDP of California alone is around 2 trillion dollars alone, which is more than the many countries in the world, but the USA is not only focusing alone on California, they try to make others state like California.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, which is more than the many countries in the world, but the USA is not only fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 266.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66917293233 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46662383416 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477443609023 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9512049942 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31087226258 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143810613068 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922028422598 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229408702319 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064801222355 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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