In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.
The author of the statement claim that in any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years because surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. While some may argue that this statement holds all the time, others may counter that claim by providing examples in support of their claim. In my essay, I will highlight both sides of the argument, and also provide sound reasoning for my claim.
First, If you look at the private giants like Microsoft, Apple, Reliance Industries, all of them are having or had single leaders for many years and all of these organizations are doing exceptionally well in their field, achieved various milestones under the single leadership. So I don't think so that after every 5 years those in power should step down from their position because with time your experience will increase and help the leader in excel the organization.
Secondly, If an organization keep on changing their top leadership, after every five years then this could create chaos in the organization. Because every individual have their strategy for how the organization will work under their leadership and if the organization keep on changing their leader after every five years then the organization way of working will change after every five years and this cloud be difficult for the employees as well as for the organization to adopt the new working model.
But as we know every coin has two sides, the above-prolonged leadership has too. This could have a negative side too, because if a President or a Prime Minister of a country will continue to run their government for a long period, then they might have demolished the democracy and rule like a dictator. For example, Hitler withheld the position for a decade and misused his power.
In a nutshell, we can say that in some case those in power should step down after five years won't lead to success as mentioned in first two paragraphs, but in some cases, those in power should step down after five years. Thus, in my view, the surest path to success for any enterprise isn't revitalization through new leadership most of the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, as for, as to, for example, as well as, in my view, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94878706199 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71607983596 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504043126685 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9350482138 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9166666667 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 5.21951772744 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305862254292 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116715998929 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172608548747 0.0758088955206 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180765224856 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129714587502 0.0667264976115 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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