Self belief is the first thing to gain something new in life. Self knowledge makes a person stronger and wiser. He gains the ability to face the situation. So we are able to take up the risk of our own without thinking of familiar beliefs. So I agree to the point that the first step to self knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
Self knowledge can be estoric to many as we people are sometime so conserved that we afraid to face new challeges in life because of our known beleifs. When a person thinks out of his boxx, that makes him more practical and firm beleiver to do anything good in life without any fear. If someone makes his mind to leave all the familiar things back then there is no going back. We just need to step out for the sake of our development.
For example, Mother Teresa had a made a self decision to help poor people and to educate the people. She made her strong belief to work for the welfare of people without thinking of what people will think. At the early age of her life she thought of becoming nun. Now a days people fear of taking such drastic decision in life. When person makes him believe in things then he can achieve many good things for himself. He can learn practicality in life.
Also there are many familiar beliefs too, which makes a person think of doing great things in life. I t all depends on what moral values we learn from our surrounding. What kind of self knowledge we gain it all depends on our thinking. So in conclusion, the first step to self knowledge is rejection of familiar beliefs it all depends on what beleifs we consider.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'we're afraid'.
Suggestion: we're afraid
...e people are sometime so conserved that we afraid to face new challeges in life because o...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...anything good in life without any fear. If someone makes his mind to leave all the...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...f her life she thought of becoming nun. Now a days people fear of taking such drastic deci...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
.... He can learn practicality in life. Also there are many familiar beliefs too, wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39864864865 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30118907238 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493243243243 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7180908917 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5263157895 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.5789473684 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26315789474 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301463456741 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11303432644 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182784916594 0.0758088955206 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229041929503 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17604049526 0.0667264976115 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 14.1392134831 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 12.1639044944 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.38706741573 78% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 100.480337079 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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