The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether the self knowledge can be earned at its best by rejecting friends and familes. Indisputably, friends and families are important for everyone to make their life happy and sanguine. Indisputably, to achieve goals in life, one has to discard their friends and familes for better development of themselves. Hence, a person should achieve its target by only focuses on it irrespective of giving attention to any other aspect.
First of all, friends are the only one who distracts you from your goal in life. Now a days, many friends are jealous of your success. They can not be called a true friend. A true friend always helps and support you in every aspects of your life whether its an occassion or any dangerous problem. The great scientist Albert Einstien, doesn't have any friends and that's why he was able to focus fully on his work irrespective of anything in his life. Additionally, a great annonymous saying, pracitce makes a man perfect is only possible when you only foccuses on your target and practice for it. The current Indian cricket team captain Virat Kohli is a suitable example in this case. He has left his own family to achieve his target of playing for India. Now he has become a great player of cricket and has registered his name amonst the greatest player in cricket history. Thus, one has to abandon his friends and families if they want to achieve their goal.
Furthermore, some families supports their children to achieve success in life. For instance, many parents admits their child in the boarding schools at a very small age and keep them away so that he can achieve success. Since parents know that getting success of their child is as important as getting their own success. Thus, in every case putting friendship and familiarity aside, one has to focus only on their target irrespective of anything else in their life.
Finally, in human history, there are numerous people who had abandoned their friends and families in order to achieve their target whether its spirituality or sports or anything else. Like in today's scenario, many has to leave their friends and their luxurious life just for an exam like GRE which is very crucial for them. Therefore, in order to achieve something, you need to abandon something and that leads to the path of success
In conclusion, although friends and families play a crucial role in our lives, abandoning them also plays a vital role for achieving success in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...o distracts you from your goal in life. Now a days, many friends are jealous of your succe...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...stracts you from your goal in life. Now a days, many friends are jealous of your succe...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...m. The great scientist Albert Einstien, doesnt have any friends and thats why he was a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...t Einstien, doesnt have any friends and thats why he was able to focus fully on his w...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...em away so that he can achieve success. Since parents know that getting success of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85915492958 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54741022618 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50234741784 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4802262219 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114764548614 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404447765451 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487012395816 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601399078138 0.150359130593 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038342686857 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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